They are kind love poems, or one works as a poem the other works as song I suppose. First thing I ever wrote so don't be too brutal: Cross the Line Sittin here feeling breezy my mind is easy Thinkin' about what could be this night My mind gets crazy as it tries to fight keeping my thoughts from turning to you There's a line that's fading away so quickly I try so hard to keep it within sight But do I want to? Do i really Want to? Do I want to stay on that line or follow you away into so much more Paths fade as we walk upon them So many steps and you can only go so far But when the path dissapears will you be there at the end Will you be there to take me as I take you and will we fall into a dream? Cross the line and make me your lover Let's put aside all the clutter and be one together I'll take your heart and give you mine And we'll drift away with the sun into the divine That's the first one I wrote and that's pretty much a standard poem I suppose. Here is the second: Stay Tonight Won't you stay the night tonight Let me hold you in my arms just right The owls are hooting, the crickets are chirping The wind blows and the trees sway in the Breeze But all I see and hear tonight are your brown eyes shining off the candle light and your breathing which sets my heart alight So won't you stay the night tonight Let me hold you in my arms just right I'll be the man you only need I'll be the man that will never let you down I'll give you my heart and I'll give you my soul I'll give you everything I have to give... So won't you stay the night tonight Let me hold you in my arms just right Life is not that perfect equation But I know we could be right with a little persuasion I'm no angel and neither are you But like the dawn and the dusk there isn't one without the other So won't you stay the night tonight Let me hold you in my arms just right... Well those are what I wrote. *shrug* Feedback and criticism (constructive as I am just an amateur and those were the first two things I ever wrote besides like a short story 10 years ago when I was in high school, so don't be too brutal lol) would be nice.