Some of my writting(if you have the time to read lol)

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Natural Mystic, Apr 16, 2005.

  1. Here's some of the stuff I came up with.

    Its a collection of poems I wrote.

    Insomniac Maniac

    Twisted up in ones own path
    Of false choices that lead him astray
    Place faith in heaven
    Because heaven is where she lay
    Warm and beautiful, light a candle
    For all those who betrayed their purpose
    And show them that light
    So they may find their way home

    Let's face the fact
    That life never stays the same
    Things change
    And the apples on the apple trees fall
    But when the Earth goes around the sun
    The apples will once again sing
    And bring hope in spring

    We are not inside the river, but part of it
    Flowing endlessly through our own greater minds
    Where time does not exist and life is complete
    Just accept that we'll never know the truth
    Live like your dying and you have many things to do
    Because tomorrow might not wait for you

    Invisible Radar

    Truth is too far away from the time we hold
    Let's take what we have and give it away
    Someday it might be told

    Impossibility

    Kicking life, down the road
    Blind fold
    Ten feet too far
    Accident car

    Light the Sky

    Never told us about the truth
    Or our right to freedom
    Imprisonment from blue sky
    Slavery in city lights

    Mimic

    Bees fly around hive
    Working for the Queen
    And making honey
    BAM! Eaten by a lizard

    Ladder

    Far,
    Far,
    Sky
    Say fly
    Say fly
    Tomorrow, we go
    We go
    No show
    Tomorrow, we go

    Notes Created Out of Air

    Now
    Now
    NOW
    Don't believe this
    These are just words
    Which you already know
    It's time to die
    Awake
    Lay flat on your back
    Facing the universe
    And let the moment sink
    Down the drain of society
    And taste the last drop of freedom
    Before you lay down
    For the last time
    Tonight
    War, hatred, despair
    Fled
    Ran away in the fear
    That they created
    To control you
    Sleep
    Dream
    Feel
    Experience
    WAKE UP
    Wake Up
    Wake up
    Wake up

    Enfold Life

    McDonalds will eat you; 46 million ways a day
    Wal-Mart will buy your soul; at half price
    TV will blind you; in your own drama
    School will mold you; into a future disaster
    Jobs will work you; for your freedom
    Money will control you; and sell you at discount price
    Your life will flat out suck
    You've just been Punk'd

    Listen and Imagine

    Listen to these silent thoughts;
    Existence isn't what we need, but who we are
    And what we mean to each other

    Without pain there can be no happiness
    There can be no light without darkness
    So sometimes it's ok to cry
    Because wishful tears come from heaven; and
    Heaven isn't that space in the beautiful sky
    Its right here inside of us, inside our sheltered minds waiting to be free;
    It's the feeling you get when you fall in love;
    Or listen to the sounds of the hopeful words sung to the waves;
    And the moment when you're hypnotized and overlook time.
    It's that moment when you actually feel alive

    And that time is now
    So make it worth your dreams and fantasy's
    Anything is possible as long as you believe
    In yourself but most of all
    In others; you find yourself
    And during that second of illumination
    Time will stretch out like the oceans over the world

    So take this advice
    Let the current guide you;
    And flow into the ocean of life.
    Don't let someone else roll your dice;
    Your life is yours to create
    And don't get down when the key doesn't fit
    We learn from our own mistakes
    So live for the moment
    And everything will turn out great
    And that's what I call fate.
    Imagine that

    A Tribute to Bob Marley

    The first moment I heard your sounds
    I didn't weight over a couple pounds
    By the time I could appreciate your rhymes
    I realized the truth about making dimes

    It would have been cool to watch you play
    Those redemptions songs and songs of freedom
    You would have mystified me with your performance;
    Although showing me enlightenment for that very instant

    You inspire me day by day;
    To act instead of lay
    Words can't describe your tunes
    “Perfect” just doesn't quite say

    This is a tribute, to you and your words of wisdom
    I'll sit by a fire and listen…
    Yes, everything is going to be alright!
    And I still sit and listen to your words all night

    One drop of your vibe is all it takes
    To put a sweet, sweet smile on my face
    Again, this is a tribute, to my favorite artist
    Ill light my lighter and hold it up high
    And let the dim light shine on through

    Your words will never die
    They never did with you
    You created a legend;
    And that legend is you

    I know its long :smoke:

    Some input would be very appreciated. :wave:
     
  2. haven't read it yet, but i like it! :hippie:
     
  3. very nice bro
     
  4. I really like Insomniac Maniac, it has a real deep message..
    check out my link, it's got stuff like that buried in my website..
     

  5. I liked your work,,,,, this one should be turned into a hardcore song---if you could id get it to a local band you know and get some music to this
     

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