Some of my poetry.

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by McLovin23_x2, May 8, 2009.

  1. A New World; Unseen
    Look at the world around you.
    What do you see?
    Can you witness the grace?
    Do you see the beauty?
    It's too much to appreciate.
    It baffles my mind.
    Who even made this?
    Who took the time?
    It seems to go on forever,
    so lush and so green.
    It's a whole new dimension.
    A New World; Unseen
    The structures around me,
    So tall & so strong.
    It's like this physical world,
    Is singing a song.

    For The Religiously Minded
    In the beginning there was Adam & Eve
    who were only covered by a set of leaves.
    They lacked any reason,
    unfamiliar to truth,
    so They created a story,
    and oh, the story grew.
    He was made in Our image,
    and not the reverse.
    We just needed a reason to go to the hearse.
    So we wrote the same book,
    But by an unwisely man.
    This crated a conflict,
    and They fought for their land.
    And for a long time, their wars have been waged,
    just so They can write one more measly page.
    He is Our property and He belongs to Us,
    though He gives Us a meaning to whats fair & what's just.
    But in the tomorrow We will falter & fall,
    And there will be no Adam left to pity it all.

    Untitled
    its like a designed suicide
    its like we failed, though we tried
    its the invention of our own demise,
    searching for spies, though it was i
    we looked in books and we looked in the skies.
    we evolved around the tools we had made
    and by those tools, we shall be betrayed
    silently.
    unknowingly.
    is this why were here?
    to simply... live in our fear?
    impossible.
    fear is uninhabitable.
    it has no rhyme nor reason
    no patterns nor seasons.
    for on ourselves, we will commit treason
    for the fear from our own creation
    will eventually lead to our own damnation.
     
  2. any feedback?
    much appreciated.
    good or bad.
     
  3. Even though I'm an Atheist and hate the idea that man and woman live in ignorance and cause war and hate with there misconceptions, I really like the middle one the best. It showed the beauty of a story that caused so much ugliness.
     

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