So Little Time I feel the urge again Just a little bit at a time But a little is all it takes To erase alot of time So many days Weeks Months Too much time - to stumble now I tell myself I can be strong But really - I don't know how Sometimes I just wanna bleed Sometimes I wanna force-feed Myself pills - they're so sweet Val's and vic's...... So good to me But they're not That's just my mind Playing tricks on me So many ways to fuck up SO LITTLE TIME.......
Untitled beautiful teardrops fall down your face from the pain i caused i open your veins to spill your life force you look so radiant while you die but i can no longer see you in the dark i watch you through watery vision but you don't see my pain you don't give a damn about me or the fact that i'm bleeding to death on the floor crying so beautiful as i die your reflection.....
Done I'm done with you I'm finished The end Finito Finé I have a life to live without you I don't have time to play All these childish-ass bullshit games My little cousin is more serious about his fucking toy trains Than you ever were about me But thats not what you claimed How do you fall out of love? BULLSHIT! That's pretend That shit's fake It's not real Confront what really went on I was depressed - You couldn't deal So you went running back to this ***** Good ol' dependable "Dj" You know this ***** stable He's broker than an unknown DJ He's not going anywhere Nobody else wants him But why'd he take you back? Just cause the other *****s taunt him? It doesn't matter though Cause you were meant to be together That why your FIRST relationship lasted... until..... we.... got.... together..... Hmm.... So what exactly does that say about you? I know! You're a stupid, cheating, lying ass bitch And I was dumb as fuck for trusting you But now I've gotten smarter Best believe I see Not only is this how it is now This is how it will always be And by the way - Stop calling my fucking phone YOU AIN'T GETTING SHIT ELSE FROM ME And you know... This isn't nessecarily the way it HAD to be But there's one thing to remember BITCH You broke up with me
Fuck You Fuck you Yeah that's right - I said it If you don't understand by now Then i guess you'll never get it It was never all about This shit That shit Him Her You Or me It was all about we The both of us together But you're the one who left In times of stormy weather I was the one with the problem So you took it upon yourself To use that as an excuse To put our love up on a shelf And yeah, at the time it hurt But now I'm over that shit I found someone who can treat me better So stressing over you It's time to quit And you know.... I'm to nice to do this shit normally But now I'm gonna tell you like it is And maybe then you'll see I gave you everything I had And more if I could do it But after a while it didn't matter And you know what? That's how you blew it You made me come to realize To think you were true I should've been institutionalized Cause I had to be crazy Bitch, you played me super shady And you thought we could be friends? Squash that I'm fine YOU'RE CRAZY And you what? I'm sorry about what happened with the baby But you know what else? It wouldn't have happened if you were my lady Not only was it impossible But I didn't get you in that kinda shit I thought I told he was a loser But I guess you're too damn thick Not in the thighs, but in the mind And you must have lost your mind What made you not wanna be mine? Were you on drugs? Drinking too much? Oh wait, I remember... My problems were too much To intense You couldn't deal HOW THE FUCK WAS I SUPPOSED TO FEEL?? It was my life that fell apart And instead of healing my heart You decided we should part YOU FUCKING BROKE MY HEART So excuse me if I come off a little rude I just can't believe you up and fucking left me for that dude I thought I told you before That ***** can't do shit for you And look at where you're standing now And who's standing next to you And before you try to dispute what I say FUCK THAT You know it's true Fuck your denial I don't have time That stupid bullshit ain't worth one goddamn dime Matter fact It's not worth a penny I've heard all your excuses And believe me there were plenty But you dropped me like I was hot You think I'm still trying to cater to you?? NOT! You must be smoking something stronger than pot And that shit is making you crazy You might wanna stop And while you're at it Stop fucking with me I'm tired of your games I played them for too long It's about fucking time for that to change And I know this shit sounds harsh But this shit's straight from the heart I ripped out the poison dart That you left bleeding in my heart It's time for a new direction A clean slate A fresh start You never understood what you had with me But you know, I think eventually you'll see When you realize That there's nobody on this earth better than me Nobody's gonna cater to your bullshit like I did, see? I was sad at first Then filled with anxiety Now I'm glad FUCK THAT I'm motherfucking giddy Between the two of us.... You lose, I win You'll be lost without me
those were cool. i like those last two the best. very powerful, using direct vernacular instead of flowery beat-around-the-bush euphemisms. ive got some stuff i could share with you if you wanted.
Thanks Scooby, those last two wee partof a set of 4 (Or 5 I can't remember) that I wrote after my ex broke up ith me. Anger makes me a good writer. I consier myself a wordsmith..... language is a passion of mine...... I would love to read some of your poetry. Either posted or Pm'ed. I love poetry.... I love for people to critique what I write, and reading others poems can really start to inspire me.....
I read these, came back, and read them again. The last two were pretty strong, and I feel a little bit like I can relate, seeing as my girlfriend and I just broke up. Sometimes maybe it's better to feel the pain and the anger and loss so that you realize how great your life truly can be when all the bullshit clears. They say you don't know what you've got til it's gone, but I believe in some relationships, the line gets blurred, and people begin to cling to the smallest of hopes within partnerships, hoping that the spark will return, or the fighting will stop. They lose sight of how happy they were while they were single, or just dating, and get caught up in all the downsides of an unhealthy relationship. I think that maybe you've seen the light (just maybe haha!) and now you know what your limits and expectations are. I'm a sucker for dark, deep poetry when I'm feeling blue, and I really liked these poems. Hopefully now all your poems that you post will have a lighter touch to them, as you move, and grow onwards. Sorry if that post was way off topic.... so, in a nut shelll, I LIKE THE POEMS!!
Thank you for the "review" Tuxxit. These aren't recent. They are jut some of my favorites. And I have deeper, more depressed poetry than this. Another goo one entitled "Choice". I think I'll post it if I can fiind it already typed.