some lyrics i made up, let me know what u think

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Pocketthunder, Aug 8, 2010.

  1. i made these pretty fast, and im just really bored so let me know what you think!

    i
     
  2. Where are the lyrics??:confused:
     
  3. #3 Pocketthunder, Aug 8, 2010
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 8, 2010
    i JUST made up these, there better then the ones i was going to orignally post: they go to the tune, we made you, by eminem if you know what that song is. if you dont know how the song goes and the way these lyricss flow then it wont be as good lol


    Look quick
    don’t step back step up again
    im back
    and I aint goin out again my friend
    my raps catch ya
    my raps make ya bend
    aroud, look around, quick
    its to late im gone again
    seein me in the middle of the den
    shocks ya,
    thought I was so awesome,
    wanna buy me in an auctin,
    its not easy
    bein me,
    see girl, I know the difference between
    pain stress and trauma and smoking weed
    but don’t get caught up in the raps cause
    im dilevering you free messages, subliminal rapture
    blow your mind your,
    eye
    it no long looks in time
    its no longer combustible its internally rear ended
    my flow so smooth you don’t know whats at hand
    cant even think you tryin blink
    you cant do it don’t even drink
    yourself asleep tonight at 3 you week
    ling the hangover doesn’t pass until you see
    me,
    up in my tree, fucked out of my tree
    smoking herb, havin the
    time,
    of my short old life
    cant believe,
    what I was spittin
    but I cant stop now
    cause im on a flow
    to Amsterdam
    gonna smoke pm to am
    then when I finish smoking,
    im gonna smoke again
    cause the lies they provide cant make me end
    I know the truth about mj, its fantastic and its grand
    how does it feel to be lied to, are you a fan?
    Exploding nerves
    My raps superb
    My motivation is wack
    My lyrics made of herb
     
  4. bro, record that and email it to me! i would totally throw that over a beat!
     
  5. heres an edited version of the same song, its much better and its also a bit longer:



    Look quick
    don't step back step up again
    im back
    and I aint goin out again my friend
    my raps catch ya
    my raps make ya bend
    around, look around, quick
    its to late im gone again
    seein me in the middle of the den
    shocks ya,
    thought I was so awesome,
    wanna buy me in an auction,
    its not easy
    bein me,
    see girl, I know the difference between
    pain stress and trauma and smoking weed
    but don't get caught up in the raps cause
    im dilevering you free messages, subliminal rapture
    blow your mind your,
    eye
    it no long looks in time
    its no longer integrated its internally blind
    my flow so smooth you be behind
    in my world my verse is quicker then light

    cant even think you tryin blink
    you cant do it so drink
    yourself asleep tonight at 3 you week
    ling the hangover doesn't pass until you see
    me,
    spittin free words at a poets extreme
    havin the time of my life
    I rhyme in my mind
    no one ever knew I could complete it but they find
    verbs and metaphors more mightier than the sword
    smoother than cooler than rhymes from heavens end

    I cant believe,
    what I was spittin
    but I cant stop now
    cant ever end this never ending flow
    cause the lies they try to prove cant make me end
    I know I rap with a groove its fantastic and its grand
    how does it feel to be lied to, are you a fan?
    Exploding nerves
    My raps superb
    My motivation is wack
    My lyrics made of herb
    Hold on to this cause you feel the verse
    its smoother in reverse
    in fact is worse
    cause I got the rhymes to putcha in a hearse
     

Share This Page