Some Late Night Poetry

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by sleepybtvh, Oct 19, 2010.

  1. Tell me what you guys think of it




    i miss how we would talk late night on the phone

    now i lay here late at night motionless and alone

    i think about you, every min, every hour, every day

    i guess living in florida is the price i'll have to pay

    and now when you go to sleep

    i wake up and think about how much my pain runs deep

    its like a fight i have to win in my body

    but through the pain, i know you'll always be my shawty

    im losing my mind here

    and losing you... thats my biggest fear

    these thoughts...

    its like im planning my next murder plot

    idk whats going on in my head

    as i lay tossing and turning in my bed

    but i can assure you that i love you and everytime i say it, its coming from the heart

    and i dont ever want to lose you, even when death do us part..
     
  2. Thats some pretty heavy stuff
     
  3. Not bad man.
     
  4. thx guys, really appreciate your comments
     

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