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Sexy psychodelic stoned music poem!

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by HippieHomoBoy, Jul 2, 2004.

  1. I was pretty blazed when I wrote this one. IMO It's one of my better poems. I enjoy it alot and I hope you do too.



    Sweet sounds of the dead
    Sooth my soul
    Open my mind
    Open my eyes
    Make me whole
    Once was lost
    Now am found
    Soulful sounds
    Sooth my soul
    Open the door
    Make me whole
    Complete myself
    Realease thyself
    Let me out
    Out of the fish bowl
    Realease me from life
    Leap free
    Out of the fishbowl
    The fishbowl of conformity
    And into the sea of enlightenment
    A soulful realease
    I slip away
    Peice by peice
    Never miss it
    Just let it go
    Realease your mind
    Tempt the soul
    Just psychodelically
    Make your self whole
     
  2. learn how to spell. otherwise, it was alright
     

  3. hmm some original stuff in here.............................................................
     


  4. Yea, I was high when I wrote this and the rest is completly origional so it's not like I stole the fucking poem.
     
  5. wow... that really was good tho. flows really well.
     
  6. i liked it, though im not stoned or fucked up enough to feel the whole sexy part, it has excellent flow.
    wait brb lemme go smoke a bowl......
    k im back, smoked a bowl... it feels sexy but doesnt flow sexy, ya know?
     
  7. tight nucka, keep up the good work.
     
  8. nice one =) I should post some of mine
     
  9. not the best i have ever read, but still good. well done.
     

  10. where are you going man?! :D
     

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