Sexy psychodelic stoned music poem!

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by HippieHomoBoy, Jul 2, 2004.

  1. #1 HippieHomoBoy, Jul 2, 2004
    I was pretty blazed when I wrote this one. IMO It's one of my better poems. I enjoy it alot and I hope you do too.



    Sweet sounds of the dead
    Sooth my soul
    Open my mind
    Open my eyes
    Make me whole
    Once was lost
    Now am found
    Soulful sounds
    Sooth my soul
    Open the door
    Make me whole
    Complete myself
    Realease thyself
    Let me out
    Out of the fish bowl
    Realease me from life
    Leap free
    Out of the fishbowl
    The fishbowl of conformity
    And into the sea of enlightenment
    A soulful realease
    I slip away
    Peice by peice
    Never miss it
    Just let it go
    Realease your mind
    Tempt the soul
    Just psychodelically
    Make your self whole
     
  2. #2 imtheJtrain, Jul 9, 2004
    thats dope
     
  3. #3 HippieHomoBoy, Jul 16, 2004
    Thanks!
     
  4. #4 shagra, Jul 17, 2004
    learn how to spell. otherwise, it was alright
     
  5. #5 stoned_soldier, Jul 18, 2004

    hmm some original stuff in here.............................................................
     
  6. #6 HippieHomoBoy, Jul 21, 2004


    Yea, I was high when I wrote this and the rest is completly origional so it's not like I stole the fucking poem.
     
  7. #7 Turelim, Aug 23, 2004
    wow... that really was good tho. flows really well.
     
  8. #8 SECRETANGEL, Dec 12, 2004
    nice!
     
  9. #9 MrBubbles, Dec 16, 2004
    i liked it, though im not stoned or fucked up enough to feel the whole sexy part, it has excellent flow.
    wait brb lemme go smoke a bowl......
    k im back, smoked a bowl... it feels sexy but doesnt flow sexy, ya know?
     
  10. #10 plumface_2002, Jan 14, 2005
    tight nucka, keep up the good work.
     
  11. #11 gongtoke, Jun 7, 2005
    nice one =) I should post some of mine
     
  12. #12 master chief, Jun 7, 2005
    not the best i have ever read, but still good. well done.
     
  13. #13 gogo, Jun 8, 2005

    where are you going man?! :D
     

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