Sex Story : My maid, the fuck buddy...

Discussion in 'Sex, Love & Relationships' started by GGrass, Mar 25, 2011.

  1. #21 goopyspooge, Mar 25, 2011
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    If you wrote an incest story it wouldn't mean you have any problems, it's just a story, unless you actually want to bang one of your relatives in which case that would not be healthy behavior.
     
  2. Of course not..
    But by doing this you would be able to appeal to a wider majority of readers..
    If you enjoy writing erotic story's as a hobby you should make a website and write for all of the different fetishes out there and make people pay for it..
    If you were to do that you would be out there enough to take personal story requests for money.
     
  3. I actually do want to bang one of my cousin, she's so fucking hot...

    BUT, I will never actually do that...

    --

    My next idea on sex story involves father and daughter, but that is too fucked up even for me.

    But what if it was step-father, step daughter relationship?

    Yeah... I can write one of those...

    --

    I'm very interested in these, not only for the horny juice it gets pumping, but also because it allows me to explore into human brains...
     
  4. Hey we all have the hot cousin dude.

    Step-daughter/step-father would be pretty cool.

    Keep writing dude, I think you have the potential to produce some high-quality smut and that is a gift.
     
  5. The adult entertainment industry is sleezier then ever man..
    They make daughter/father porn (not real just actors) just for people with that type of fetish.
    As for what I've highlighted in bold...
    It will only be a cause for concern if your next story fantasizes about eating them.
    :wave:
     
  6. You sir are either ignorant, or, as I suspect, very very funny.
     
  7. Yes the story was pretty sweet but I don't like the skin color of Cambodian chicks (kinda Indian like)
     
  8. You have skills. 5/5
     
  9. The story gave me a boner, to bad its not true tho, I really thought it was until the end, when you say its not.
     
  10. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=szkgylvDYA4]YouTube - Wayne's World Shwing Shwing[/ame]
     
  11. #31 oceansgreen, Mar 25, 2011
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    well for a first story... i'd have to say your heads as fucked up as mine, if not than worse:wave:
    and i think it's actually a pornographic literary piece, romantic novels are more of the kissy kissy stuff than than str8 to the sex, not really certain but stories like this are all over porn sites so potential cash my friend
     
  12. Lmaoo this reminds me of the Family Guy episode where Peter tries to write erotic novels and then his father in law ends up getting sued for publishing them and then they sell Meg weed, knock her out with the lamp, and take her money and the weed. Peterotica hahahaha that episode was so funny.

    You do have skills though, I'm looking forward to reading some more of your stories.
     
  13. At first I was like "GGrass you slut:eek:!" but now im all like "ohhhh I see whatcha done thar...;)". Not bad man. If you ever do try making some cash on these watch out for grammar. Have someone edit em for you before you try to publish.
     
  14. Yeah I loved the story...
    But the beginning of intercourse was borderline sexual assault/rape lol.
     
  15. Bad slave. Sleeping on the job?
     
  16. Yeah I agree with you there I forgot to mention that part in my first comment, I found the first part of the story kind of odd but I continued reading hoping that it would level out.
     
  17. Thank you all very much for your comments.

    I'm... sure you've read better things before, and I thank you for taking time to say something about it.

    Really appreciate that.

    --

    As for the story, everything in it is true, except it never happened.

    Well, almost everything...
     
  18. Sure it didn't happen ;)
    You should write up some practice ones in your spare time and post them on here...
    So people can comment and give you criticism.
     
  19. I would write more often if I was horny more often.
     
  20. Eat a 24 hour Cialis and crank out those storys!
    I've got a real funny neighbor man...
    He's addicted to crystal meth and he's always geekin'..
    Thing is he's a hell of an artist, acrylics, pencils and oil paintings galore the man's got undeniable talent..
    The funny thing about this character is that his wife is around and he ALWAYS has porno on like every TV in his house.
    Little TV by his art desk, PORN.
    TV in living room, PORN.
    His wife is always watching her shows in the bedroom because all he watches is porn.
    Funny shit.
     

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