Hey everyone this is my first real post on grasscity.. whats good? i decided to blaze up and stay in from the rain tonight and write some shitty poetry which im going to share with complete strangers cause that's how i like to roll. Thanks and enjoy! Also any criticism good or bad is welcome. robull in the future robots will suck they wont have souls but they'll pretend to they will inevitably trick the whole human population into believing that robots are all for freedom but quite the contrary they lack any real depth in the way they perceive reality this is just a distraction what is a paradox? a present time traveling fox? a past ghost that comes forward to haunt? a future in black and white? a technicolor dream crashing with other technicolor dreams? ripping them at the seems whose sowing these seeds in my mind camping in a well lit room hit the reset on the remote turn back the clock for a brand new start power stations look so much better at night when the lack of light makes them shine power poles connected to power lines that power the little rooms in my apartment complex
Something Weird All the walls fade to black, and all the blocks fall down to build a wall of uncertainty. I look outside through my front door to see a stallion horse in my front yard. I think I`ve gone crazy, watching them grazing I step out back, in my backyard. I listen to the notes that those birdies will sing, and I chirp away so that no one`s shy. I walk in the field and I take my seat, down in the grass forming ocean waves, and I feel it grow as I watch the clouds. Waves of colour will form, and I`ll just smile, as I watch the sun drop below the horizon And the clouds will float away from here, with a gust of wind by puffy cheeks and I will lay in the grass and gaze at stars. This airplane ride, has reached peak altitude, and we`re coming in, on a landing strip. I will get off the plane and people will crowd around. I`ll try to explain, but only get half way, they`ll think I`m crazy, but that`s okay. `Cause I know they`re wrong. I`ll go into bed, unable to sleep Just lay in bed and stare at the ceiling, remembering the day, and my past. Then I`ll wake up again, and stare outside. See the stallion horse in my front yard. I know I`m not crazy, I`ll just go for a ride. So I saddle him up, and say "Let`s go!" He`ll gallop away without direction, and it`ll be okay, yes I know I`ll be fine. Fairytales Place each; brick by brick and you better hope they stick 'Cause oh, Piggy, Piggy, The Wolf has come to blow it down. I'm sure, it's like heaven so nice, a group of seven 'Cause oh, Miss White, You never know when they'll be gone. Such peace, zed by zed these floating from your head 'Cause oh, Sleeping Beauty He's about to disturb it all. So odd, step by step A beast you've went and kept 'Cause oh, beauty Belle, He's used you all along. Fairytales, word by word just to think how absurd 'Cause oh, Me, oh Me You won't go far in fantasy.
I like both of your poems deadbeat very well done but I really like fairytales, it has such a great darkness to it. Here's another one of mine i did this weekend. everything i write is a marketing scheme i met her drowning in a wishing well so i threw in a quarter and wished her good luck she completely in-completes me i asked the bartender to top off the bottom of my heart cause its always so god damn empty. i've been stumbled from city to city looking for something and at times someone thats just a little bit more pretty. hanging my heart like a wreath on every door of every second hand pawn i come upon no more flattery miss ive had enough of your limp wrist antics or maybe i just need to have one to many more ive spent hours in front of the mirror just looking for my reflection but nothing is there oh well better luck next time next reflection seeing season she spreads broken glass on the bed sheets while I pour kerosene down the halls lets set the smoke detectors off my sympathy was thrown up with last nights rotgut i've fallen and i cant get it up