Hey guys, so I've been high as fuck this past week and have been working on a rap. What do you guys think? So i hang at my homies smoking that dank ass green Grab the lighters, roll 'em up there isn't nothing between you and the groove, that funky Bob Marley shit is peace love and no war just gotta go and get lit just take another hit, and forget the past and forget the stupid laws created for a fucking plant which has been shown to cure cancer and other diseases but i guess without our consent the government gets what it pleases the people need to make their voices heard by the higher ups the politicians really need to just shut the fuck up with these lies to the people of the united states but soon it feels like we'll be the divided states we need to take a stand, grab a hold of each others hands we need a plan, to let them see the demand of our herb, and let them see what we've been smoking on forever don't worry this idiocity will soon be severed (Chorus) Then you realize, we gotta legalize, just open your eyes, realize that you've been fed lies the drug war is a joke, for a medicine filled with hope but fuck it, go out and puff on some motherfucking dope Alright! x2 So now in Colorado and in Washington you can possess up to an ounce of some dank ass bud Just a thorn in the side of the governments plan to take away our rights besides the father's command now i don't believe in God but there's something i just don't understand if he created everything, including the fruits of a plant then why you Christians Mormons and Jews gotta mutilate divine words of a so called deity creating medicine for the world a medicine, yeah that's what I've been calling it it aint a drug, hell why aint we selling it for profit oh wait, we are, they call em dealers i call em herbalists but they're being put in jail, we need to raise our fists at this bullshit, this aint fair, to not care for the people living on this land we all share stop the arrests, stop the feds, stop the DEA from taking our rights to enjoy our life why do we gotta pay Chorus x2 Fuck the drug war, yeah that shit aint educated the government really needs cannabis regulated a plant consumed by millions and billions of profit that could be going into our politicians pockets to get us out of debt, or at least help what we can plus decreasing crime the prison rates and the increase of demand but they wont listen to the people, or should i say the sheeple cant fucking wait for the united states to turn regal its evil, the president will become a monument the congress and the supreme court will be the parliament oh wait, this sounds like something we've done before the revolution is the solution and it may end in war the people will rise, and with it we will bring on their demise start a new lead, take a seat and watch it before your eyes these lies, they aint hoping or working to cope with the inevitable truth we'll win with the power of hope Chorus x2 Rate it please?
You ight homie, coming from a person who's been writing bars since he was 8 or 9, I'd say you're good & you speak about some real shit but your metaphorical value needs some improvement. Don't be unmotivated though, stay up, physically & mentally