Rate My Bars

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by addlestoner, May 2, 2012.

  1. Well i just figure we could all post our lyrics here and offer constructive criticisim to eachother. Ill start off


    hey welcome how are you
    chill have a zoot
    have a few
    grab a pew
    earl dabbington im dabbing you
    through my vapor tube
    keep your paper zoots
    im in a hater mood
    see you later dude
    gotta go yard to make some food
     
  2. :) better than i was expecting to get, Ive only just started im playing round with a few different rhyme styles to practise. Any tips you wanna share?
     
  3. set fire to your mums house shes coughin in her bed
    now shes burried ina coffin laying dead
    spraying red from your dads missing head
    dissing feds with bars their kissing men
    diss again well i guess you just missed again
    from london not michigan
    time travel in a shop mr ben
    mr spliffy just spliffed again
    like a character from mr men
    mr tickle mr stretch mr fucking miss again
    anway im going of track
    its time to snap back
    no not a snap pack
    im not a fat twat
    in your cheenos
    please no
    could you just please go
    i dont wanna see those
    kill you with an e tho
    bigging up my ego
    some call me evol

    lets talk about my town
    good place to by brow
    this place is really run down
    full of really dumb clowns
    with their numb crowns
    signing on for some pounds
    glum hounds
    but every dog has its day
    or so they say
    do i pray yay
    for an escape to the bay
    where i could just chill for the rest of my days
    and just blaze away
    instead of stting with a razor blade
    and a hazy brain
    from a hazy strain
    picked up on a rainy day
    jump on the beat and ill flame away
    looks like the games changed again
    game of fame
    gaME of luck
    gaim of pain
    game that fucks your brain
    the very same game that chews you up and spits you out again
    leaving you insane
    the beasts never been tamed
    beasts never scream names
    the monestereats dames
     

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