Rap Verses Together!

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by TigerBite, Apr 13, 2011.

  1. #1 TigerBite, Apr 13, 2011
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    We have a place to battle and a place to share our individual verses, but no place to rhyme together. So hopefully, we can build off one another and make some sick verses, without the intent of dissing one another. Positive messages.:smoke:



    get this started Tiger is up first/ he’s ready to burst/
    my lyricism tear racism/ right in the heart like criticism/
    my bites penetrates hate/ and make no mistakes/
    we’re the modern day samurais/ living days being crucified/
    we got friends all over/ doesn’t matter what your club/
    and we all are sober/ but smoke a good bud/
    if you don’t got a friend/ i’m not afraid to take your hand/
    they can misunderstand/ see, they don’t understand/
    mama taught me how to be a man/ and see, we got feelings too/
    sometimes we need tissues/ cause we all got issues/
    we’re not bulletproof/ but we gotta move troops/
    and suffer much before/ we can find much more/
     
  2. #2 cberry8, Apr 13, 2011
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    Never trust a whore, She'll bust four in your door
    Rather explore the true nature, Girls with more that's in store
    Fight the allure into the gore, The true meat of their heart
    Ones who speak with no guard, Those who wanna go far
    You still fight and you spar, But hit the lights and you are
    Everything I've been seeking, Needing, Yearning, My star
    Shooting, I'm wishing afar, You've come true to my arms
    You're my warmth and my passion, The fashion that of the Gods
    And when we clash, You're the Titan, Looking passed all my scars
    Flashing power if you leave, Into the Earth, Crashing hard
    You knew all of my cards, A two, Seven, Off suit
    Cuter than a pair of queens, Nike's her one pair of shoes
    Fresh like they've been unused, Sex like you've traveled the world
    Toes curled, Hair twirled, Into the universe we're hurled
    The Milky Way on another day, But tonight is our last
    To look passed the stars entangled in a mass that contrasts
     
  3. my man Berry speaks the truth/ talking with that wisdom tooth/
    i had a girl who was off the hook/ plenty of mental dysfunc-tion/
    did i mention i never got the ac-tion/ but patience is a virtue/
    we had chemical attrac-tion/ really?/ it's allergic reac-tion/
    and that's the truth/ she was packed in the booth/ head to toes/
    but i had to let go/ met a real girl after we in cons-tant laughter/
    has a real warm heart/ we can stay apart/ and still keep the spark/
    best of all she lets me touch her body parts/ but i don't know/
    a girl like that deserves respect/ if i can't give that then i don't deserve her ass/
    i don't mean to interject/ but she's ready for a fami-ly/ wants a ba-by/
    fuck/ i'm just a fucking kid/ and she's the epitome of lady-ship/
    i'm not man enough/ not tough enough/ to be a father/
    i still got shit to uncover/ not ready for the covers/
    i still wanna be lovers/ find shit and discover/
    fuck/ i guess it's pretty much game-over/
     
  4. the game aint over, it just begun,
    when i see cops, i got 9 lives so i run,
    like run forest run, white boy with all the potential
    but i live for fun, only make time for the essentials,
    rhymin, fuckin, and makin trips to the dental,
    spittin fire got my mouth in constant detrimental
    the fastest way is central, i make a hole,
    then bury my dust, cause the underground is cold
    if you tryin to catch up, you be stuck, in a clusterfuck,
    while i keep on keepin on,
    like the stone that just keeps on rollin on,
    my mouth moves when my mind is gone,
    on a whole nother level, my word is bond,
    im timeless like dusk to dawn
    i evolve like a pokemon,
    let the rap game know whats goin on,
    I bust the hyper beam, everything is gone,
    take a look back,
    I know whos in it to win it,
    if you knockin at heavens door i say who is it,
     
  5. letsssssss goooooooooooo
     
  6. who it is is irrelevant/ let's get back to the relevance/
    it's my man GZA/ and we be coping on the DEA/
    we be smoking anyway/ take a load of our DNA/
    we can drop it ten feet tall/ and still be busting balls/
    we working hard and raw/ smoking buds/ that's our law
    living life/ love our wife/ giving my baby girl-the world/
    we don't mean to be disrespectful/ we try to be respectful/
    if they want to go toe to toe/ we can bounce pound per pound/
    even on their playground/ we got that Minnesnowda/ straight up flow/
    we don't miss a beat when we spit/ the shit we say the law don't permit/
    ask your peers about it/ we don't fuck around/ not the least bit/
    we definitely and indefinitely/ the talk of town/
    who's ready for another round?/
     

  7. Yeah I'll kick another round, just because i love the crowd,
    But the haters just look while they raisin up their brows'
    I know I'm so insane wit it.. wow, Comin with the craziest style,
    If you want beef then I'm aimin for cows, Wowwwww,
    I know I'm rusty as fuck, but I stay humble when bustin a nut,
    And I'll got a fly bitch that loves to cuddle my junk -____-
    Umm, I'm respectful and shit, but i just cant help deckin a bitch..
    You know, just go tekken and shit?, But then she deflects all my kicks,
    Starts wreckin me quick, And I say I learned the meaning of womens rights,
    Cuz I just want to get it in tonight, Sit back and hit the pipe,
    I must be high now cuz this makes no sense like kryptonite,
    Just livin life, Trying to get my clap on like that guy --->:hello:
    ....But without the crack high, Its nap time, I rap fine,
    Favorite rapper of your motherfucking rabbi,
    Now someone continue this shit before I ask why,
    Its 'ramadan' and I'm eating haters up during fast time.
     
  8. I know I'm nothing special but I was listening to a instrumental and thought of this. I know it's pretty whack but I'd appreciate positive criticism not just saying that it's shit, it's my first time

    peace

    its a little somethin about life and respect

    ive put quote marks around it to make it stand out


     
  9. this shit is so dope!!

    As soon as I get home, I'm going to put up some of the stuff I have written :)

    edit: Dam guys, some really siiick shit. You guys put any of this to a beat? Let's get that Grasscity mixtape goin!


    P.S. this is my placeholder lol.
     
  10. Nah, I haven't really produced any beats before, but I was imagining it to a really simple beat. Maybe just an electric guitar strumming or an electric guitar strumming with a mild percussion.
     
  11. what do you think of mine? feedback/ positive critisism would be welcome
     
  12. sorry about not stringing this one on, just tryin to revive this

    chillin, make a killin, able and willin, still billin
    makin the cash to the first degree, pussy slaughter on a killin spree
    make a bitch get on her knees,
    suck deez nuts till the lock jaw freeze
    beggin please, when i bust my nut she covered in my steez
    you know it, bend her over, don't pull it,
    big dome and length like a mullet
    girl grab it, cant control it, bust like a bullet
    but i stay sprayin, keep sayin those prayers,
    i keep tearin the hy- amen,
    for my sins i face the leviathan
     

  13. The leviathan is stylin'/ burnin down tracks like a pyro fireman/ while higher than/ a junkie gettin his fix and smilin'/ you try to sin/ i naturally release vi-o-lence/ actually decrease my own sense/ while factually bleeding from 5 holes in my chest/ you think im tryna jest?/ i'm more wicked than those bitches in salem's fire pits/ or david berkowitz/ vertically slashing 666 prostitutes in the wrists/ now i cease and decist/ because i can't think of any lyrics to finish this
     
  14. first rap ever.lmao. its so bad, its bad.

    Praise the herb you mutha fuckas can rap/ knock republicans out/ got mcCain takin a nap/ I aint a rapper by trade/ but this thread got my brain thinking insane/ lemme tell yall somethang/ as a child feelin wanted was a foreign feeling/ taught myself everything/ now im reaching my dreams/ writers block!!??

    Omg that was my first and last rap ever lol.
     
  15. My latest work, first line about the glitter and gold is nas's line, the rest of it is all mine

    Hes in Cameras n action, glamour, glitter, and gold
    Visions imprison myself before my story unfolds
    So here it is, bout sharp as a razor
    Bookmarks spark the page where my rage meets paper
    A gladiator, on the the mic like visions of steel
    Commisions earn the profit in your pocket, payin for meals
    I keep it on the real, speakin the truth
    Wu had it right when chose to provide for the youth

    Master crafted, through the needles and thorns
    Visualize the sex extra wet with people, not porn
    Ive torn mics, down in the gallows
    Empty streets with creeps that be lurkin in the shadows
    Quick to snatch your wallet, and call it a day
    Theyll kill your wife, take her life, for a chicken fillet
     

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