Rap made from a friend look it out :) what do you think?

I like your flow, however me myself I'm more of a fan of pronounced lyricism, like legible. Not say yours isn't legible in a bad bay, I'm just preferenced to pronounced lyrics that you can hear that are a focal point of the song.

 

Lol it sounds just like the other 999999999999999 wannabe rappers on YouTube/SoundCloud...

 

This is because rapping produces sound waves.