RULES FOR THE TOURNAMENT WILL BE AS FOLLOWS! From the time each round starts - contestants have 24 hours to check-in (just find the thread made specifically for your battle, and post "CHECK!" in it As soon as both people are checked in - you have 24 hours to drop your verses (16 lines). Once both verses are dropped, i'll let voting go for 24 hours. so each round will take a maximum of 3 days. i know it's not ideal cause people wanna flow but it works out smoother this way When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING definitions can be found below. all will result in automatic DQ. and i aint talkin bout Dairy Queen Feeding / Flipping Feeding is using part(s) of your opponent's verse in your verse against them. Flipping is using part(s) of your opponent's verse and "spinning" off of it. Anything that resembles the above two is included and is not allowed. Will result in a DQ if opponent wishes. Example: if i had this in my verse: "i'm like a bike with no bars - can't handle this! steady bringin that fire like candle wicks!" my opponent couldn't respond with this in his verse: yeah you're like a bike with no bars! YOU GOT NO BARS! i'm fly like birdies and you aint SHOT NO PARS! Recycling Recycling is reusing your own past lyrics/concepts in newer material. Swaying Persuading voters or would be voters that a verse is better than and/or deserving the votes in comparison to the opposition. Swaying can also be done by talking down on a verse or pointing out its flaws. Examples of swaying: "I keyed my verse in like 15 minutes but it took him HOURS to make his." (This doesn't matter. As long as it's in before the deadline the time used to make the verse is irrelevant) Biting Biting is using other people's lyrics and passing them off as your own. VOTING: Voting will be explained in the original post of all battle threads. Everyone's votes will be counted as long as they follow the voting protocol. LINKS TO ALL BATTLES WILL BE POSTED IN THIS THREAD AS WELL AS UPDATES ON THE STATUS OF EACH
its all fun and games till somebody tries to battle spuds making puns with names and show they soft like flower buds don't test me cause i might strike quite foul so you best be dropping that mic like right now snatch you rats up from the dark like a night owl plus i bring the animal out ya girl so she just might howl but ya girl said you like to lick her vagina too. i said look, thats fine a cool, but i aint that kinda dude. i dont go down on dirty bitches i guess im just too classy if you want a tip for your next battle just ask me round one easy win i got through you fastly. i rap like im ali sending out punchlines that'll hurt you i talk shit about your mom and treat your sister like dirt too put your dukes up why your hands left at your hip man? i send a jab its a sure hit, now he got a cleft lip damn! then my uppercut sent him outa orbit, now thats a bad trip dan.
I see your pics the devils son, damn, how appropriate Take this Big l to the face like you smokin it Every verse an opiate, Lace it with the dopest shit Leaving me alone with a mic.. Like leAvin popes with kids! Ferocious grip, choke and lift the metal and words are born in Nerves are torn, singed.. Generally when i speak they give the surgeon warnin Like virgins torn in, Leave em bleeding, fam in churches mournin Enter your house break the door hinge like urkin Mormons A hearse and four men carrying you out, 2 of em left Cause you lightweight.. Feel like I'm battlin a mute and a deaf Wish you could hear yourself man you ain't saying nothing The little engine couldn't why this faint train chuggin Im not a moral person man i Taste brains.. Scrumptious, But I'm righteous with this mic shit all the saints prayin love em! Ain't sane, onions got my head fucked.. Bud burnin my brain And don't rep new York got your sigs turnin in graves Good luck
Spuds' verse was efficient, it definitely got the job done. But from a battle rap standpoint, it'd be hard not to give this one to dan. His flowed better and he had a couple good haymakers thrown in. vote: dan
[quote name='"Blunted Hogwash"']Spuds' verse was efficient, it definitely got the job done. But from a battle rap standpoint, it'd be hard not to give this one to dan. His flowed better and he had a couple good haymakers thrown in. vote: dan[/quote] That about sums it up perfectly. Dan
voting for dan, less typos, better flow, more complex structure. spuds had better punches though, really like droppin the night owl ish
Yeah Dan that was fresh man for real, do you have any work I could look at. I am working on some hip-hop tracks right now, just trying to get my name out there as a producer.
I actually like the way spuds attacked him more, Dan's verse seemed more passive. However, Dan's is better constructed over all. Better flow, better lyrics, and just more content in general. vote: Dan