Rap Battle Tourny Round 1: Blunted Hogwash vs AMEX accepted

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by BadTripDan, Oct 20, 2011.

  1. RULES FOR THE TOURNAMENT WILL BE AS FOLLOWS!

    From the time each round starts - contestants have 24 hours to check-in (just find the thread made specifically for your battle, and post "CHECK!" in it
    As soon as both people are checked in - you have 24 hours to drop your verses (16 lines).
    Once both verses are dropped, i'll let voting go for 24 hours. so each round will take a maximum of 3 days. i know it's not ideal cause people wanna flow but it works out smoother this way

    When writing your verses consider the following:
    NO FEEDING/FLIPPING
    NO RECYCLING
    NO SWAYING
    NO BITING

    definitions can be found below. all will result in automatic DQ. and i aint talkin bout Dairy Queen [​IMG]

    Feeding / Flipping

    Feeding is using part(s) of your opponent's verse in your verse against them. Flipping is using part(s) of your opponent's verse and "spinning" off of it. Anything that resembles the above two is included and is not allowed. Will result in a DQ if opponent wishes.

    Example:
    if i had this in my verse:
    "i'm like a bike with no bars - can't handle this!
    steady bringin that fire like candle wicks!
    "

    my opponent couldn't respond with this in his verse:
    yeah you're like a bike with no bars! YOU GOT NO BARS!
    i'm fly like birdies and you aint SHOT NO PARS!


    Recycling

    Recycling is reusing your own past lyrics/concepts in newer material.

    Swaying

    Persuading voters or would be voters that a verse is better than and/or deserving the votes in comparison to the opposition. Swaying can also be done by talking down on a verse or pointing out its flaws.

    Examples of swaying:

    "I keyed my verse in like 15 minutes but it took him HOURS to make his." (This doesn't matter. As long as it's in before the deadline the time used to make the verse is irrelevant)

    Biting

    Biting is using other people's lyrics and passing them off as your own.

    VOTING:
    Voting will be explained in the original post of all battle threads. Everyone's votes will be counted as long as they follow the voting protocol.
     
  2. I was hoping I would get a breeze through battle on the first whim....
    EWWWWWWW Nastyness, CHECK CHECK CHECK
     
  3. Just drop already..
     
  4. #5 Blunted Hogwash, Oct 20, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: Oct 20, 2011
    Alright, here it is.
    edits: Is Amex checked in?

    that persona is wack, I'm just addressing the gay part
    you're prone to harass but no better than they are
    Amex Accepted..the hacksaw's packed for the messes
    you bag raw? get that glass jaw tapped in a second
    get this rapper a reverend or pastor to bless him
    give your holy ghost a broken nose when we battle in heaven
    you chat with the feds, license plate, ask 'em to check it
    they ran it, got 'em trafficking meth in an Acura Legend
    that's a reason to diss, cause y'all are pieces of shit
    hell, if we cyphered I'd probably get a 'cease and desist'
    no shit, he could call me up to get a nickel for a sesh
    I could show up and he'd hit me with a citizen's arrest
    but honestly, I'm not too sure if he fucks with police
    I just get a certain feeling from my gut when he speaks
    that son's a fucking square with the cuffs in his jeans
    with his off-duty swag with the cuffs in his jeans!
     

  5. God damn.
     
  6. #7 Blunted Hogwash, Oct 21, 2011
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    Amex knows about this, right?

    edit: I didn't notice he checked in.
     
  7. #8 flapflip, Oct 21, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: Oct 21, 2011
    Amex wins! His bars are so beastly he didn't even have to post a single one to destroy you :cool:

    Amex +1
     
  8. It's getting close to the 24 hour deadline, where you at, bruh?
     
  9. 36 hours and wow..nothing happened.

    Just kidding but has Amex even been online? Maybe something happened with his PC or something.
     
  10. this type thing is more typical of a visa matercarrd
     

  11. Man I'm out in the middle of bum fucked no where in a small Hotel in West Texas and their WI-FI went down. If there is a way to check my login times you can see that I haven't been on since around the last time I posted. That is a beastly verse you got there though, don't know if I can top that but it would be a shame for it to go to waste. If deadlines are deadlines then I would say that you deserve the win. If deadlines aren't deadlines I'll write something up real quick.
     
  12. I told Skies I'd be lenient about it if it was up to me. So write away, I guess.
     
  13. Word.
    Alright then I guess I'll get to it.
     
  14. Yo internet is bein spotty as fuck right now, I'm going to drive down the street and finish my verse in the car. Even if it doesn't count fuck it, you put yours in I gotta do mine. That's just how the game goes. Expect one from me in a few.
     

  15. Sipped Tanqueray with Rachael Ray and learned a dish that I have to fix
    Grab a tray right away it's HOG's feet with a rack of ribs
    We never know what you mean or what you're babblin' about
    So you'll be served with some beans and an apple in your mouth
    The blows comin' so sudden, nothin left but to chalk him out
    I blow BUD and you're not Joe Budden but welcome to the slaughter house
    PIG, rat's aren't wise guy's so I'll arrange the drive by
    You couldn't connect a metaphor on a meta-board if your pen had wi-fi
    A Kentucky kid couldn't beat me if the deadline was a life time
    Your backgrounds faker then a green screen during prime time
    It was a good attempt, you cant say his ass didn't try
    He conditions by exersizing outside just to battle online
    Clean house with Hogwash, I can't say that he's not important
    I'll split his wig then use that to dust the trophy I got for it
    Give your mother my apologies, child support wasn't sent in
    I got nothing in my wallet, just the comdom you shoulda been in

    fuck if i know
     
  16. Yeah, that was dope.
     
  17. wow, close one here.

    both are pretty good verses

    this really comes down to preference and I feel like Amex went harder longer, even though Hog
    started out shitting on him.
    I gotta go Amex
     
  18. blunted came hard all through out i feel amex went hard every other line on punches, both flows were nice so im not comparing the two just punches my friends

    +1 blunted
     
  19. damn.. another battle i gotta come back to lol

    this is the illest first round gc's ever seen
     

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