Voting has expired, Dreadlocker wins with a count of 7-0 Deadlocker smokin on the hash leaves me spaced out, i hit you like the buff, POW your erased now. ive see ICP rappers who dont flow nice leavin you face down in second place clown, wow. my textual styles super clean just like my textiles, im furuious, mysterys, just like x files. im infectin the text files and then dancin till dawn, an empty vial bboy who reppin it strong. ill battle you, any element, im dope with the lyrics, uprockin, and spraycan penmenship. up in a thousand gritty shitter stalls, you couldnt ever flic it all an n60s not even digital. my photos will put you to shame, when you lived in montana i was invading your brain. you didnt even know it but while your were drooling at the trains i was gettin my fame! way south freaked the fuck out the first time he saw northwest snow sayin, "its the cold damn i swear" to his new methed out festering taco i understand yo, its an easy target for the baby and a green card then you can claim residence ,and maybe even get a green card. the final four is for the cats with organic green yards chemdog, hashish, edibles, equates to my mean bars. next time your in the northwest scene south... hit me with a pm ill show you my forever green house.
my rap is shapeless i do drugs in excess to relieve the stress somehow it will kill me, i guess but thats ok, i ain't got no regrets ever since i was a sperm i've been considered a germ but i'm gonna be here in a long term like a soldier standing firm and i'm too scared of myself so i hide inside a shelf i'm a myth, like them elfs but i'm true like god himself so, how you doing, dread? i don't consider you a threat i'm a virus, so i spread all over this motherfucking thread Don't really dig it, but fuck it "i'm still a wannabe rapper guy" like some genius said.
smokin on the hash leaves me spaced out, i hit you like the buff, POW your erased now. ive seen* ICP rappers who dont flow nice leavin you face down in second place clown, wow. my textual styles super clean just like my textiles, im furuious, mysterys, just like x files. im infectin the text files and then dancin till dawn, an empty vial bboy who reppin it strong. ill battle you, any element, im dope with the lyrics, uprockin, and spraycan penmenship. up in a thousand gritty shitter stalls, you couldnt ever flic it all an n60s not even digital. my photos will put you to shame, when you lived in montana i was invading your brain. you didnt even know it but while your were drooling at the trains i was gettin my fame! way south freaked the fuck out the first time he saw northwest snow sayin, "its the cold damn i swear" to his new methed out festering taco i understand yo, its an easy target for the baby and a green card then you can claim residence ,and maybe even get a green card. the final four is for the cats with organic green yards chemdog, hashish, edibles, equates to my mean bars. next time your in the northwest scene south... hit me with a pm ill show you my forever green house. *edited see to seen
neither of these really even resemble battle raps but my vote goes to Dreadlocker since his was more coherent and more complex with some punches...
Nice, but hey...you seem to know a lot about my life...stalker? ...just kidding. Good luck brother. And my N60 beats any digital camera any day
umm i guess i have to give it to dread locker for rhyme scheme, but none of these seemed like an actual battle verse but what ev's
I understand why i didn't use a rap "battle" scheme...but howcome you say dreadlocker didnt? now you gotta diss the other person and swear a lot to be called a battle rapper? pop out of that bubble, guys...thats quite cliche.
you do have to diss the other battler....that's why it's a battle. swearing has nothing to do with it....
because it was brought to my attention u might not all understnad graffiti terms and how the relate to my verse, here is a mini dictionary. and we both write graffiti, me and south, so for context. buff = the paint city puts over graffiti icp= stupid rapping clowns uprocking = part of bboy dance n60= his crappy film camera up in shitter stalls refers to how many places i taged (takin pictures is part of graff) drooling @ trains is him watching graffiti from my area and i think u know what green cards are
I don't mean to call you out or anything I'm just thinking about my verse really wondering if I need to add another 8 lines...
One was short as hell and the other was long, but I didn't see too many punches in either. Overall i give it to Dread though.