XCITED's Verse I'm so laid back, my passport photo will have to be landscape, In my backpack I've got some rope, so act brave and I'll tie a loop and leave you hanging like I don't do handshakes. Comparing me to you is like the bible to a dissertation, Like comparing the fish that fed the five thousand to a strip of bacon, If I don't win this competition the throne should be vacant, You should be cursing your luck, the draw has left you forsaken. I am now sitting here smoking thai, Your all going to witness him crash and burn, I gotta make this princess die. (Princess Di - Diana). He hasn't even got his facts right, Rapping about popping AK46's and Mac 9's, If he eliminates me its a sad time, Cause I'm just warming up, prepping like its half time, I'll eat you up and metabolise you like an Enzyme, You spent hours on this, to me its just a short past time. Putting in so much effort, cause you want the cash prize, you make me vomit, But I understand, America is a very religious country, so it only makes sense you're after a profit (prophet), SagaciouSlug's Verse Don't get the wrong idea cause I'll give you second thoughts, I send it off the top as if I spilled spaghetti sauce (stove) You ain't a demi god so don't be fronting with that gun shit, Couldn't press my buttons if you touched a rusted trumpet Just by peekin at your name man I can tell your seriously lame, Only way this geek could beat me is the penis game, Alphabets assembled in lines to punch through you, I don't own a Ford cause my back is func tion al (funk shin ul), You ain't the love guru dude so why you xcited From the way your demonstrate, change your name to left be hind, Dawg, its fit to call you bitch cause your garbage, Your both a lady and a tramp so put a muzzle on it, Rhyming ain't your skill so quit the hyperactive scripture, I'll take it microscopic to watch cytoplasm wither Off your ass, head around the block and beg for clothes, Your flesh and bones are stepping stones within my quest to grow @[member="XCITED"] vs @[member="SagaciouSlug"] Click HERE for sign-up/information thread. This is a 1st round match, both battlers need to check in within 24 hrs and have another 24 hrs to send their verse to me (Glock Coma) via PM after checking in. Make sure you read the rules below. Vote on all the other battles if you want people to vote on your match. Lets see some BARS
you got 24 hrs after both of you checked in so take your time if you want. PM me your verse when you're done and I'll post them both up
PUNCHES - XCITED (X was a little more direct where SagaciouSlug sort of veered off in the middle and didnt land much) NAME PLAY - SagaciouSlug (There wasn't much nameplay but XCITED had none so SagaciouS gets this) WORD PLAY - XCITED (X had the better wordplay. Liked the effort from both with what you did, but X's was a little more direct and clean) PERSONALS - SagaciouSlug (Slug hit a little harder with the personal shit although he lost in punch count) FLOW - XCITED (X's verse flowed a lot better for me. Slug didn't have bad flow, but XCITED's was a little better) MULTI'S - XCITED (Better multi's and more of them. Won this category pretty easily) ORIGINALITY - XCITED (Some of Slug's stuff was pretty good, but I liked the angles X came with and some of his schemes were pretty good like the Princess Diana shit) XCITED takes this one for me on better punches and flow. Slug had his good moments, but the middle of the verse was pretty bad and hurt his performance a lot in my eyes. Good effort from both but XCITED had the better battle verse today. +1 XCITED
Xcited has some great fucking content there, i did enjoy slugs but in my mind theres no comparison here, has to be xcited, respect to slug tho, i feel like both these verses speak for themselves in the voting process should be no contest not trying to front or nothing but xciteds verse is just on another level.
PUNCHES Tie (liked an equal amount of punches from both) NAME PLAY Slug WORD PLAY Tie (Princess Di mde me lol, x had a few too) PERSONALS Slug (X just felt a little generic) FLOW X ( Slug, Bruh, from that first line on, I didn't feel your flow. I mean, you gotta atleast have SOME sort of equality with your syllables) MULTI'S X ORIGINALITY X In the end, Im gonna give my vote to X, it was very close, but slugs lack of flow kinda killed his verse for me. +1 X
Haha daaamn, looks like I'm taking the L for this one! Oh well, it is what it is. Not tryna make any excuses but I think I definitely could've put more effort into my verse, I wrote that shit in like 10 min. Haha. On the flow, you gotta follow the commas. Commas are everything when it comes to text. ~1996 Jiggawattz~
I hear what your saying fam. I gotta say your flow isn't as bad as I might have made it sound. I didn't mean to make it sound like your flow was terrible. That being said, I still feel that X did just A LITTLE bit better.
sag was good but xcited took this one. that was a really good verse. good flow, nice rhymes, nice punches and wordplay. +1 xcited
I feel you man, if i was apart of this i would of lost for sure, i dont even out any syllables at all with my writing its just not what i do, i have my own flow in my head and conveying that properly can be difficult at times, its not like yours was bad by any means but shit, if you say yourself that wasn't you at your best and that was probably xcited at his that leaves a gap that shouldn't be there, best of luck homie.
I hate to just chime in with the rest but I enjoyed both verses but if I had to pick it would be Xcited
Not related to the battle shit at all but I gotta say... I love your name, haha. I wouldn't never thought of that. ~1996 Jiggawattz~
I gatta give it to (sagacious slugs) lol he got me with the penis game line, that shit had me cracking up. Thought he had a stronger finish too Sent from my Galaxy Nexus using Grasscity Forum mobile app
Xcited had better punchlines, ended with a good punch to i like that a lot. I liked he tryed to use some good word play, Sagacious tried just as much word play to though. I've seen slug's rap before and know he has potential, you can tell it was rushed and he even said it was. I like that he trys to use big words and trys to even multiple some like "hyperactive scripture" and "Cytoplasm wither" but with doing that its still got to connect and hit hard. I really think Xcited+
