ReadThis' Verse Bitch stop your bark, didnt ppl tell u that, dats all noise/ Just cuz u got a pussy, and a chest with two soft toys/ Doesnt mean I wont murder ya, I never heard of ya/ But Ill still murder ya, like that song from the lost boyz/ A ghetto love is the law dat we live by/ day by day I wonder why my shorty had to die/ Cuz she challegned a guy, named readthis/ but she aint know what she was doin so when she read this/ she gonna be speechless, then cry to god like "Oh jesus"/ "I cant believe this, man so talented i should take him to bed"/ naah bitch im good, u aint touchin my wood...ok u can shake it instead/ maybe taste it with head, cuz u aint a dime u aint even average/ Forehead could fit traffic with those fat lips, lookin like patrick/ I kno I slumber alot but what bitch u been livin under a rock?/ Like summer im hot, this race im in first place taste the exhaust/ face it u lost, n the only time u got balls is when u smother a cock. ItsReneeYo_'s Verse Good luck with this battle champ you're gonna fuckin need it And if you're smart this is a warning , I suggest you heed it Like the Seahawks with no Sherman , you got no defense Like a lyrical gun to your head call that shit a prefix I've seem some of your verses you got some juvenile flow But Ima sacrilegious schism and I'll end this show Now save all that weak shit for weak minded hoes My lines is poisonous something like arsenic flows I ain't no dope fiend but I'm addicted to this rap shit Ill body all you niggas like I write my shit off in a casket Ima rebel I swear , as soon as I'm seen on the scene We all know you're a pussy and my flows make you cream O great almighty lucifer I pledge my life to you After I body bag this nigga I'll leave the toe tag to you I'll leave you scarred , fucked up , bloody bruised bones Looking like ET nigga , now here's the phone. @[member="ReadThis"] vs @[member="ItsReneeYo_"] Click HERE for sign-up/information thread. This is a 1st round match, both battlers need to check in within 24 hrs and have another 24 hrs to send their verse to me (Glock Coma) via PM after checking in. Make sure you read the rules below. Vote on all the other battles if you want people to vote on your match. Lets see some BARS
I am def. gonna need to see a second verse from both before i vote, i suppose its up to everyone else; i vote it even. I guess i should elaborate on my vote, i feel like both parties had good rhymes but there was no one line that really stood out on either side for me in comparison, renee did have better flow however i feel like readthis had slightly better punch lines, maybe ive got it all twisted but thats just my opinion.
it was pretty close but i feel like readthis' verse gets too sidetracked in a couple parts. overall the rhymes and flow were pretty close but id give my vote to itsreneeyo because her verse is more focused and consistent.
i felt like Readthis had way more shots he could've taken, was basic when he had a avatar picture and other issues he could've attacked but he didn't. He did have more multiples i thought. I feel like Renee could've came harder to but just when it came down to had a little bit better verse under the circumstances. +1 to Renee
PUNCHES - Renee (Both had about the same amount but Renee gets it for having the better lines) NAME PLAY - None (Didn't see any of this from either verse) WORD PLAY - Renee (Renee gets this for better references. Not a real word play heavy battle but Renee had some shit here and there) PERSONALS - Read (Didn't see much direct personal lines from Renee. Read went in on a couple topics like the female/gender shit) FLOW - Read (Read has some of the best flow out of the verses I've read in the tourney so far. Some of Renee's lines have weird syllable count sometimes and it throws me off) MULTI'S - Renee (Not a real multi-heavy battle from either side, but Renee gets this for having better quality multi's than Read) ORIGINALITY - Read (A lot of Renee's shit was kinda general, although a good battle verse I'd like to see it more direct, maybe throw a little more nameplay or wordplay. Read had some original references that were poorly done, but more unique than Renee's verse none the less) This one was pretty close for me but Renee gets it based on her punches, which hit a little harder than Reads. Overall she had the better battle verse but both need to be a little more direct and original. +1 Renee
Really close battle, both battlers have two different styles making it harder to judge. Read had a insanely good flow and some great personals on the gender hype. However Rene had harder hitting punches. Overall I think Readthis won it with his personals and his superior flow. Close battle though, whoever advances will probably go far in this. +1 Read
Read this, pretty decent throughout the verse, consistant with the insults.. however nothing over the top, Renee kinda the same, pretty close IMO but I'm gonna give it to read because his personals were better
PUNCHES Renee (although neither had amazing punches, Renees' were alot better) NAME PLAY Tie (neither really used name play, thus a tie) WORD PLAY Renee ( simply better word play) PERSONALS Read ( while Renee did have better wordplay and punches, they were simply too generic) FLOW Tie (Didn't really feel the flow on either of them honestly.) MULTI'S Tie ORIGINALITY Read (Again here, even though Renee had better punches and wordplay, it was generic, atleast Read tried to be more original and personal) When it comes down to it, I feel this was a weaker battle than it should have been. Both are talented and I would like to see more from each of them. If I had to vote I would declare Renee the winner. Simply because a battle is about punches and wordplay. +1 Renee (BARELY)
i already put my vote in but i just want to say that readthis had a profile picture to look at and had the gender card to play and still wasnt all that creative IMO. renee had next to nothing to work with in terms of a picture or whatever to inspire personal lines. this is part of the reason why i voted for her, i guess i should have put that in my first post.
Yeah, but she could have atleast put homies name in it or something involving his name. For all I know (and Im not saying this is what she did, THIS IS COMPLETELY HYPOTHETICAL) she coulda just had that written in a notebook somewhere. It was mad generic. Readthis atleast went after her gender. he went after his opponent. She just went in, in general.
its so easy to go after someone's gender or someone's looks. what was renee supposed to do? come up with personal lines based off the lil nigga from the boondocks? lol. idk man. not trying to argue, just adding on to my original reasoning as to why i voted for renee.
nah. just saying, use his name some how against him. I think she won either way. and her verse wasn't bad. Just pointing it out in my reasoning for that vote in that category of my vote.
originally I did use his name it went something like read this I suggest you read this , and I contemplated on using his name throughout but decided against it cause it was lame as fuck to me. based on the outcome of the votes my next round will be better.
