I just wrote this and wanted to share, because it owns. ignite the widow, fire white, burn bright, smoke stoned height, float, riiiight? that cryptic chronic, robotic bionic flow, electronic sonic, go -- stop. breathe. iron lungs and thc, a catalyst for creativity settin' me free... a glimpse of reality the way it was meant to be -- stop. breathe. open up your mind and perceive. deceive the body and flee. disease-ridden vision retreat, revealin' what the eyes can't see - cerebral clarity. I know somebody will battle me. let's go. hah
aiight man i got some stuff i just wrote this for now the biggest secret to dismantle your state of mind locked up, in this box of thoughts defined combined, intertwined my esteem had once declined but watch your back, cuz now the planets are aligned are ya disinclined? i redifine all preconsieved notions no need for the motions, they require emotions im concerned with present bitch, here and now so bow, turn around ill eat ya out like puppy chow this is another rap ive writeen previously I transcend the fabric of both time and space Regress ya with my powers to the Mongoloid race To a much lower place of knowledge base, erase Liability case, this aint no master race My words are like addin fuel to the fuckin fire Like intangible conductor wire, somethin ya desire See ya couldn't even hope to immitate, sublimate, venerate Just generate hate, cuz ya can't alleviate My only goal, to overthrow military control Ill fight with all I got, body and soul I wont show self control, fuck no, ill play my role Bitch, ill turn ya into a fuckin arthritic mole My words bring tears to powering oppressors Im the aggressor, I kill their lines, no successors Like a taxassesors I apply painful pressure The lyrics I spit couldn't be any fresher my profetic electromagnetic anestetic unsympathetic genetics are hardly apologetic my phonetics on thier own cause kenetic prostetics all because im the prodigal poetic apathetic not to say that im the second commin, but damn my egos bigger the whole enron scam BAM! i think im gunna need an oral exam bangin more than died in the forest of (viet) nam blinded by a blanket of replete deceit here to make incomplete wall street elite im unable to defeat, so ya better retreat im here till death, disabled the ejection seat we live under the modified american plan it started way before the attack by japan so if cappin a bitch gets me 10 in the can cappin 10 mill should get you death, mr. government man
That was good. Can you come up with that stuff on the spot? Dont get me wrong, I would battle you but my vocabulary isnt that big. It would take me a long time to think about what I would say. I remember I made a rap about Holden in Catcher In the Rye for school though. It was sick. Edit: OK I couldnt hold back. I have to let it out. I tried to make it go with the book. I got blonde hair and I got brown eyes Gotta watch me as I flip those fries They go from frozen, to golden My name is Holden...a.k.a. dropout Used to go to school until I got kicked out Missed out on all that learning Now Im just turning and burning the burgers Damn, I forget the few lines in here. O, well. You got me here, standing on thin ice Next time Ill think twice Look and listen Maybe I will make a better decision
lol nice, mike. "my profetic electromagnetic anestetic unsympathetic genetics are hardly apologetic my phonetics on thier own cause kenetic prostetics all because im the prodigal poetic apathetic" that was the best part. you're not too great at spelling, but your rhymes are awesome.
I don't know who you were talking to jtp, but I can't freestyle. I have a deep vocabulary and I'm a good writer, but I need to take my time. haha. the little short thing I had posted at the top I just had one goal, to write about smoking, and that's what I did and it turned out good.
thats tight man, i made a rap for oedipus rex, a novel by aristotle or someone...class loved it, brought me from an F to a D, so i was happy. no i cant come up with stuff like that on the spot, usually takes me about 1-2 hours to come up with somethin like that, i havnt been goin long so im nto that great...but im gettin better
yeah, we read that in my humanities class in college. i had trouble staying awake when we watched the play... :/ lol
this is more to a raggae tune in my head but.... here goes: My mind won't believe Cuz my eyes they deceive how can, we be, so far from grace i pray for the day, i may toke anywhere, anytime, any place free from the fear that i hold deep inside...searching for the lights that light up(light up, light it up...) in the sky.... the red and the blue, theres no white at night, the flag that means nothing if yah stand up for yah rights no justice to be had for the tree burning nation, ya gotta take it in stride and light up with determination.... ... i dunno if any1 will catch on the tune in my head.... but yah... thats my thing...
wow did mine just that bad? enough to just completely annhilate this thread..... haha...... uhhh... nice?
This is my drunk freestyle Im bout to go wild Twistin blunts full of herb, Smokin on the curb, Im to high to be violent Im ready to be silent Relax and chill Enjoy how ya feel 'Thas jus my intro, But yall cant hear the instrumental' Grab a gun and throw it at you, Jus to see what you'll do, Your nothin in this game, Your new, Tryin to play me like a foo, I dont play around, Ill put you underground, 6 feet deep, Watch me creep, We from Detroit City, Not a bitch like fitty, Ill blow a nukkas head off, With the stolen sawed off, Watch the blood as he cough, Heh, He thought we was tough. Aight thats it, Im drunk, Im high. No idea if this is good or fuckin horrible. Too drunk to know. Jus shit off the top of my head and drunk so i didnt even read it over. Jus straight raw drunk freestyle.
yo yo yo I'm looking for a dime that's top of the line cute face little waste with a big behind I need a dime, that's top of the line............... lol...Mike Jones.......Ying Yang Twins
ey yo..... yo..... check it..... "milk... milk.... milk milk chicken.... chicken chicken milk, milk chicken milk, chicken chicken chicken.... milk milk milk... milk, chicken, chicken, chicken, milk milk, chicken, milk chicken!" honest to god story..... my friends brother.... at his church talent show when he was younger.... went up on stage and did a "rap", that was 6 minutes long.. using only 2 words... milk.... and chicken....... hahaha
im the only unpresidented, uncontested lyrical manifested, rapper not arrested they dare not even try to trot on my game because they know, if they try and bring the blame ill rain on them, i firestorm of wrath so fuckin bad einstien cant to math im like a high priest of sorts with my sky high staff but im fair as shit, i aint no james m. bath ill gat blast anyone who gets in my path i twist ya everywhich way like a parabola graph and when im done smoke yall bitches ill have a good laugh im increasingly inexcabable this shit aint no fable, ill rape ya on ya kitchen table when its done ill be on americas most wanted because i make shore like a whore my killings are flaunted
dude thats sick.... why would u wanna rape someone on their kitchen table..... you'd rape a dude?..... ....... you don't see many gangsta rappers who'd rape a dude...... ! damn im higgggh.... .... these smileys rock......
Yo, i'm new on these boards, so please dont ignore me, my skills sharp as a sword, like a bud plant i'm horny, sippin on forties, cliche it may sound but check my location, i'm reppin northtown. Here, shit is ghetto, cars are lawn obstacles, without las vegas, COPS wouldnt be possible, the 'gangsta' lifestyle shown on TV is fake- i live the "real life story" on which it was based, you can emulate my style, but you'll never be, the bootlegging bandit known as Clarity.
You ain't nothing but im something I'll attack ya while your in your little shack Your rap is crap so just go back to smoking crack You want to battle me lets bring out the cavalry Your not hip hop you look like you listen to kid rock The only projects you've seen was at your 9th grade science fair You're fucking dreaming so just wake the fuck up cause I'm steaming