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Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Apex Word, Feb 18, 2010.

  1. Thank You Sis Ion Remember Doin That Line Tho Lol.





    ~Toni~
     
  2. From that one sis, the first rap, almost to the end. :D <3333
     
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  3. Ohhh That's Vintage Blunts Verse Lol Mines The One Below It. I Sure He Appreciate That Tho.





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  4. Ready to catch a case?
    Variants moving at a faster pace..
    No worries..... just mask your face,
    And show you got 2 shots so you can pass the gates
     
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  5. #13265 Dizzy, Mar 10, 2022
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2022
    @VintageBlunts Verse 1




    Do or die, super high, loose like Crooked I

    Only hit the bird if the booty took flight

    Hit a plug with goods, pop him

    Take the drugs the profit and push the weight an unstoppable problem

    My raps are for dope fans who smoke greens

    Get choked fam then i smoked your whole team like coke fiends

    Ligature marks around ya throat

    Give you a viking funeral off the coast drowned on a smoking boat

    No one really test me, because I'm known to flip

    So much pure in my flow that you can overdose on it

    When I talk that animal there's lots of showmanship

    You know it's lit if i released it, show the crypt

    Where i was exhumed from in new form with 2 forms

    Stay safe or get placed away imprisonment under my new laws

    Snakes, dogs and name droppers cop the flames

    Last thing you want is me rocking up at your place

    If i got a reason to be angry, then be worried

    If I'm just chillin' havin' a sangria i don't wanna be hurried

    All i know is murder my life a everyday struggle

    Stay locked onto the stars gazing like hubble, get placed in a bubble

    Let me sign off with this,

    Got beyonce serving me scotch on the rocks and moon rock spliffs

    Dizzy and Vintage, too creative to test us

    If we doing it for family in some cases we'll have to be arrested




    Cocoa Toni Verse 2

    Ima Force My Way To To The Top Yall Got No Choice But To Let This Crazy Black Girl In Ima Back Again Toni Strike Her Enemies Unpredictable AF Like A Tornado Or A Whirl Wind// Tryna Battle Against Tonika An Dan You In For A Harsh Learnin BC We Got More Magic Tricks Up Our Sleeve Then That Magician Named Merlin//

    Had Another Nightmare Last Night An Woke Up This Morning With The Twinges. Haters Wanna Kill Me An My Back Against The Wall But When Im Cornered I Get Vicious// Yall Don Wanna Mess With Dizzy T An Dangerous Dan That The Number 1 Way For You Sordid Lil B*tches To Forfeit Your Existance//

    Try To Battle Tonika Or Vintage Cant Do Noting Just Sit Back Back While We Lyrically Nuclear Bomb You// Yall Lames Is Just To Obtuse Man So I Move Ina Room Full Of Venomous Snakes With The Agility Of A Mongoose//

    Ima Boss Lady On The Low Movin Behind The Scenes An Too Quick To Catch That's Why My Husband Bough Me A Chain That Say Road Runner// I Stay Fresh An Dressin Flii Even Tho Ion Show It My Bank Account Be Lookin Like A Phone Number//

    Tonika A Walkin Contradiction Like Smart Fools Ion Even Got The Times To Argue With You Narc Dudes// Yall Just Too Animated Like Cartoons But If You Make Me Mad I Draw On You So Quick It Like I Fast Forward Through Art School//

    We Bust Our Heat Out Proper Screaming Death Before DisHonor Me An Dan The Top Shottas When It Comes To Rhymin Not Even The Sun Is Hotta// When Im High Off That Blessed Ganja I Hit My Boo Up WithThat Boom Shocka Locka Leave Him Needin A Walka An He Know He Done Married A Beautiful Monsta//

    Me An Dan Handle Our Business An We Stay Bossed Up Never Worry Bout How Much We Got Cash We Spend Or How Much Theese Outfits Cost Us// We Like Lupe Fiasco In This Rap Game Folks Want Us To Dumb It Down But We Never Doo Me An Vintage Done Forgot More Bars Then You Ever Thought Of//

    Im Bout To Make It Really Scary Up In Here Cuz Cocoa Toni The Illest With No Sympoms Yall Might Have To Call Me Typhoid Mary// Jealous Haters Rotten At They Center An Infect To Everyone Around Like The Haunted City Of Derry//

    One Fact Yall Need To Understand Me An Dans Flows Reach From America An Jamaica An Australia All the Way Back To The Mother Land// Keep On Pushin Us An We Gon Snap Like A Rubberband Yall Don Wanna See Our Evil Side Come Out We Got Split Personalities Like Those Rappers In Dirty Dozen Had//

    You Lames You Need Not Have Givin Us a Reason To Start Up If You Even Try To Step To Us We Spaz 10 Times Worse Then Soulja Girl On The Marta// If We Go Out We Goin Out Ina Blaze Of Glory An Defiant Till The End Like The Former King Of Sparta//






    ~Toni~
     
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  6. Pretty friggin powerful sis! Y'all are killing those verses!!! Epic.
     
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  7. Thank You KK I Think This Actually One Of My Better Ones. You Gon Be Around FB Tommorow Sis?





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  8. Life ain't what it should be but who am I?
    I am nothing but one more human who is losin and abusing nicotine, like gasoline to put out a fire, getting higher and higher and the whole thing comes out to nothing but another bad time. I can't cope like this, I can't think like this, can't do anything but sit and let my head play out the games, the same, the shame, the flames getting higher and higher and getting high is the only thing that makes the demons stop.
    But when I can't get high, all I do is cry and say Why and I just want to die.
    All because what happened to me is too real and no one wants to hear, they're done with my tears, they say to suck it up and get over it because it's all in the past, can't last, can't ask for anything to be different, life isn't fair so it's okay not to care.
    I can't do this anymore, I'm on the floor, locked the door, can't see anyone, I'm no fun.
    I see my cat, she knows where it's at, all she has to do is lay there sleeping, never weeping, just chilling and never illin, the only stress she has is hairballs.
    I wish I were a cat, imagine that, all my needs met by loving hands, bigger hands that can pet me and give me love.
    All I want is to feel peace, can't see, can't be, want to be free!
    When will the pain end? When I'm dead? Can I ever have a good time on Earth again?
    Goodbye nicotine, goodbye vape, no more escape, can't be that way, so goodbye old friend, I'll miss you til the end.
    Goodbye to the past, kiss my ass, it's time to let it pass, and take a new path...
    These rhymes are not sublime, but they're mine.
    All I can do is stay alive.

    Hazel Moon, (c)2022
     
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  9. #13270 Dizzy, Mar 14, 2022
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2022
    Wow Sis I Like That! you Very Good At Makin Rhymes An I Can Tell You Got Alotta Emotions Went Into This. Maybe Sometimes I Could Do A Text Collab With You Too? You Very Talented!




    ~Toni~
     
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  10. @StickyEnt Thank You For The Winner Rating. Me An Vintage Got Alotta Other Verses On The Previous Pages If You Wanna Check Them?




    ~Toni~
     
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  11. Okay gonna try this lol. I did this a few years ago.
    Just playing around with hip hop, using the instrumental track of Oasis's "Look Back in Anger."
    I'll post the verse under the track. It takes about 16 seconds to start so bear with it, thanks! Hope it's ok to put a sound file here.
    It's not Eminem or Snoop Dog but hope y'all enjoy. :D


    DEMONS
    By Hazel Kate Quinn (c)2018

    You don’t know, I guess you don’t, when I tell you leave me alone
    I do not mean keep standing in my face in my own fuckin place
    Demanding that I listen, I don’t need to listen cuz I heard it all before
    You can use the door or hit the floor, it don’t work no more

    You’re nothing but a stalker, mind raper and a gawker,
    You stand there and you try to tell me what I do
    How I’m talking, how I’m acting, how I dress, like I should confess
    To being wrong somehow for fuckin’ offending you you act like I’m killing you!

    You know exactly what you’re doing dude, I got an attitude
    Cuz I can’t get away from always fightin, you
    I tell you get out, you just get loud tell me you’re not going anywhere
    Til you set me straight, say look, Kate, you are just preaching hate!

    It don’t matter what you say cuz you’re just gaslighting me,
    It’s you all up in hate, you know just what I mean,
    But what’s so fucked up is you just will not give up
    Til I’m drooling again on that old couch sleepin and drunk

    Yeah that’s right where you want me, hiding in my house
    Never comin’ out, never doing anything, never singing
    Never rapping never playing, never doing a fucking thing
    But daydreaming and bleeding inside while you’re still scheming!

    No one likes you when you’re down no one likes you when you’re up
    You can kick me when I’m down but you better let it go when I stand up
    Cuz I’ll get rough and then you’ll be on the ground
    You just won’t give up you lie, you cry, you get my people on your side
    They won’t let me kick you out
    They keep letting you back in and they scream, trapped in your scheme
    Cuz it’s all about me in your eyes you gotta beat me
    Or you just can’t survive, open your eyes I’m just one fuckin person
    I never said I was better than anybody else
    I’m me, I just do what I please and I don’t hurt nobody!
    You just preachin how I don’t mean a thing I say
    Well fuck you loser, you fuckin wish you owned me.
    You have no idea what hell I been through, just to tell the truth!!!
    But you act like I’m some alien trying to change your point of view
    I never tried to change anybody I accept you how you are
    But you went too far you won’t let up til I fall apart
    You’re fuckin crazy! Why are you so persistant on me?
    What is it about me that makes you so threatened and determined
    To cut me down, just like that clown in Stephen King’s IT
    You’re a serial fuckin killer, a stalker but I ain’t havin it!

    You want me to kill you you want me to slam you right into the wall don’t you?
    Yeah I could do it I could kick the shit right out of you!
    But that’s not my game, no I know just what would happen
    I would go to jail for fuckin assault or murder, trapped again!
    That’s just what you want, isn’t it, for me to lose control
    Prove your lies right what kind of menace I am, hell no!
    I will not let you in again don’t try to break my fuckin door
    You just won’t leave, you just won’t leave, I can’t hold back anymore!

    Bang, crash, splat, is that your head on my wall?
    I don’t fuckin believe it that’s your brains on my wall!
    You would not leave me alone you kept grabbin me and holdin me
    Restraining me physically, I could not let you hold me!
    So lock me up for self defence, I get the point but what is this?
    They’re telling me it’s not my fault, I had no choice you wouldn’t let me live
    You would’ve stayed here til I cracked and then you would have smacked me
    Into the wall and then I know you would have killed me, now you’re gone
    I’m gonna carry on, you demons won’t come in my head no more,
    Fuckin tenents in my head not paying rent, your blood is on my door!
    That’s ok because there’s much more space I’m free again!
    You no longer control me, your reign was a joke, and now it’s fuckin’ at an end!!!

    Yes!
     
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  12. Wow thank you sis that means a lot coming from you! Bc you're pretty amazing at verse, my friend. :)
    Lmk what you think of the one I just posted lol. :D Thanks!!! I'll write you a PM too.
    And yeah let's collaborate sometime! That'd be awesome!!!
     
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  13. Your One You Just Post Is Great To Sis. I Just Wish I Could Rap Verbally Like Some Of You Guys But All I Can Do Is Text Ones. Thank You For The Compliment Tho On My Verses KK! I Look Forward To Your PM Too!




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  14. Thank you so much sis! I just wrote you back. :) Well your verses are great! Very creative and fierce. Anyway yeah maybe we can collab on something soon. Talk to you tomorrow hon!!! <33333
     
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  15. Ima Drop My Own Lil Verse Soon On Here.





    ~Toni~
     
  16. You're the virgin to my Madonna and the Kurt to my Nirvana. I'm still in love with you, it true through every season and for any reason. You the best there ever was you are just because. I miss having you in my bed and getting head.
     
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  17. ...
    But thanks for the lesson
    Cause the life that I choose
    Won't make me feel like living
    With the Bensonhurst blues

    And don't, don't try to write me
    And don't bother to call
    Cause I'll be in conference
    Merry Christmas you all

     
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  18. Standing up for what is right, I won't go down without a fight. I know a lot of things and I don't wear any rings. Better than your average girl, I'm a pearl.
     
  19. Fucking with me will leave you senseless
    The beats i rap over are beastly and relentless
    You cant touch this even if ya pristine and pretentious
    I been digging for goldmines since i was 16 in the trenches
    I use a rapper like winehouse used drugs and booze endless
    I'm not fucking with you i'll come to ya studio and shoot up ya crew
    Bust a move cop a head knocking, There's no stopping me
    Leave ya missus with a busted spine and wet stockings G
    Professional when it comes leaving ya aired out
    I'll send a pride of lions to ya whereabouts it's terror mouth
    Tear ya out of ya position youre built up to
    Fuck clout, fuck respect and fuck you
    I'm mentally unbalanced, a rare and potent addict
    Flow so dope it's coca, your putting on a show so dramatic
    You're a few steps behind the ones with the minds that matter
    Under one banner, on our grind with a stash of bad habits
    Shatter anyone with any kind of average talent
    The challenge is bringing order to something so unbalanced
    I'm personally known as that rapper with the fire
    It's the messiah, the sire the mire the passionate writer
    untill im retired banish the liars
    I'm fire, carry my damage on my shoulders and still stand higher
    I'll be doing this shit till i'm dying and retired
    you ust had a job now ya fired
     
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