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Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by maritimesfinest, Jan 20, 2010.

  1. Yo whats up everyone pretty new here checkin this out, want anyone to comment on what you think of my writting just started and would love to hear what any one has to say to help make it better and post your own material! This is something i just wrote not long ago and let me know what you think guys. No chorus yet but my buddies workin on it.


    verse 1

    seem so young lookin out for my identity/
    the world not ready to see what ive become to be/
    just rappin not sayin im the greatest emcee/
    turnin the new age jus barely nineteen/
    rememberin when i was young grew up wit a stutta/
    always there for me can't turn your back on ya motha/
    want to do good in life live it up with the chedda/
    youd do anything in this world if it meant now or neva/
    sometimes i got myself locked in this mix/
    gotta relieve this stress so on the mic i spit/
    don't give up on my life mom told me never quit/
    always stayin true you know im legit/
    fell inlove witha girl now it feels like i exist/
    walk down memory lane to our first kiss/
    thinkin about you is so hard to resist/
    don't make the wrong turn u wont know what u missed/

    verse 2

    i made the choice decided to smoke some weed/
    some call it a habit some call me a fiend/
    plantin my future with gods gifted seed/
    success on my mind and im plannin to succeed/
    u know when ur the realest cuz it hurts when u bleed/
    haterz keep on hatin tho thou shall proceed/
    want to live the life where u gotta be free/
    but back to reality i'll get my college degree/
    lights camera action ill be on the tv/
    imagine all the people whod be buyin my cd/
    or end up in this town forever keepin it low key/
    appreciate me for who i am yours truly/
    no not a g but im someones homie/
    rappin till the day i die the one and only/
    one with the universe i'll never be lonely/
    comin from tha view imma rep it fully/

    verse 3

    big city dreams livin on the east coast/
    tryin to spread my love like butter on toast/
    shout out to my crew, my friends, my folks/
    to everyone ive shared drinks with and had a few tokes/
    to my girl i can't let go i hold closer than close/
    someone to talk to when my problems needed it most/
    loves sometimes covered by an invisible cloak/
    sat down on christmas day jus to write you a note/
    wanna sail on this ship and rock it on the boat/
    you get me higher than any drug the feelings like i float/
    strivin to be ur man ur love n protection/
    if i were to die today youd be my resurrection/
    if no ones messin with the love its connection/
    if i ever lost you it be the hardest reflection/
    ill learn and i know ive earned the rights to your affection/
    i think its about time i let out the emotions kept in/
     
  2. hip hop bass

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UpgH9UqsdLg]YouTube - shawn killin on bass[/ame]

    MEE!
     

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