Poets Thread !

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Michaelrdnr, Dec 24, 2012.


  1. I really liked yours man! :hello:
     
  2. #22 uscalus storm, Dec 29, 2012
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    Yea that was great!
     

  3. If I may critique..I'd change the 2nd to last line. There are many times we want to blame someone for these HC feelings we have but to bluntly say it always throws me off as a listener. Its telling me that the only reason the author hasn't done this yet is because he has had people to blame throughout the past. But are we so innocent to judge the decisions of others? Here..to keep living..you'll have to find someone to blame "something" on continuously throughout life. No one wants that, on either side :)


    Great poem here! Vacation made me giggle...sort of.
     

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