poem without a name...

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Girlz2Disrupted, Nov 22, 2002.

  1. think
    thick sweet honey girl
    if he stares
    then rob your need from eternity
    the raw love in your breast
    will rust with time
    take the whispered urge
    and crush it
    under the black flood waters
    so it is just a shadow
    beneath a frantic sky
    suck your power back
    feed the soul that starves for him
    with shame
    bury it all
    behind indifferent eyes
    and pouty lips

    any ideas for a title...

  2. I just got around to reading this and it's very good! Excellent images and done with a "cool passion" that's hard to keep from exploding off the page:) if you really like poetry, please check out my old site. It has over 40,000 poetry posts, some of the best on the Web are there. Look in "Lovers Cove" for some romantic masterpieces;)

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  3. i kept waiting for someone to say something! i like it...and thank you for your compliments...i really appreciate them...and i will check out that site...thanks cap!


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