think thick sweet honey girl if he stares then rob your need from eternity the raw love in your breast will rust with time take the whispered urge and crush it under the black flood waters so it is just a shadow beneath a frantic sky suck your power back feed the soul that starves for him with shame bury it all behind indifferent eyes and pouty lips any ideas for a title... ~L
I just got around to reading this and it's very good! Excellent images and done with a "cool passion" that's hard to keep from exploding off the page if you really like poetry, please check out my old site. It has over 40,000 poetry posts, some of the best on the Web are there. Look in "Lovers Cove" for some romantic masterpieces http://pub26.ezboard.com/bdacaptnsdockonpoetsbay Da"Hope Ya Like It"Captn
i kept waiting for someone to say something! i like it...and thank you for your compliments...i really appreciate them...and i will check out that site...thanks cap! ~L