Poem i wrote earlier...

Had to write a poem for one of my classes at adult ed. Many different subjects, But supposed to be personification and shit like that with a inatimate object.

So one of the choices was evil and i ended up doing that.

Here's what i came up with.

Each line means something deep so jus reading it and not really thinking it wont mean much to nothing at all.

I Am Evil.
I have no respect,
I'm quick to neglect,
Sometimes i kill,
Just for the thrill.

Nothing is realer,
I am the stealer,
I am the lie,
The envy in your eye.

I am known as crack cocaine,
I ruin lives and reap pain,
Evil souls sell me in vain,
Ruin another life in this game.

 

Thanks homie.

I also got a plus rep or two for this. Thanks too bro's.


Anymore comments welcome. Im not much of a writer or anything. But sometimes shit jus flows and i go with it. Usually when somethings wrong.

 

Lookin for more replys.

Got a few +Reps plus comments for this poem.

I jus wanna hear what people say.

I made a buncha lines and changed and took out a buncha them.

Took me a couple hours to write this and get what i wanted wrote down.

 

Well, Anybody else?

 

Thanks ya'll.

I used to write rhymes or poetry alot. Havent in a grip. Except this.


Makes me want to do it more, Explains how i feel. This poem means so much to me, Each line means something so deep. Because i know what crack does to people, And people i love. My cousin, Who i basically feel is another father of mine, is in prison doing 5-20 in a prison where he'll be lucky to make it 2-3 years and it hasnt been a whole year yet and ive heard stories. He got busted with, Belive it or not, 125 lbs of weed and over a kilo of cocaine.

Crooked detroit police took the weed and about a ounce or two of coke and charged him with the rest of the coke and only that. But he has a record to. Jackon is where he sent. Worst pen in the state of michigan. Where all the killers and rapists go.

So that poem is soemthing very, very deep.