Pls Critic my work

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by iamoni, Oct 10, 2010.

  1. #1 iamoni, Oct 10, 2010
    I visualized this image when I just toked and tried to create it in photoshop.
    Pls criticand leave ur comments.
    Tnx ^^ :hello:
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  2. #2 NFloyd2357, Oct 10, 2010
    its cool man. whats with the weird polaroid and what looks like a tarantula? either way, i like it
     
  3. #3 CJR, Oct 11, 2010
    It looks like the nuclear bomb is ripping the image from the picture
     
  4. #4 ZipLockBag, Oct 11, 2010
    I think you're right CJR... cool.
     
  5. #5 impactfour, Oct 11, 2010
    do you mind if i steal this picture for a poster? idk why i really like it, gritty, but detailed.
     
  6. #6 iamoni, Oct 11, 2010
    Yep CJR was right ^^. the bomb ripped off the image from the pic...

    I got problems with making it look like paint or something liquid and glossy that flowed out of the pic
     
  7. #7 iamoni, Oct 11, 2010

    No problem man... I shouldn't have reduced it's size cuz it was way more bigger when I was working on it.
    That way you should have a better picture / resolution of the pic for ur poster . Changing the perspective of the roadway made the picture gritty and didn't got to create the dusts effects I wanted but I was happy with my work..ehehhe

    So here ya go !! Steal it ^^

    Thanks for the appreciation guys..
     
  8. #8 iamoni, Oct 11, 2010

    Actually it was a butterfly...Ahahahha yeah you're right.. when I was working on it I showed it to a friend and told me that I over distorted (can't find a term for it) that the original picture was barely recognizable..
    Thanks for the appreciation
     
  9. #9 The Third Eye, Oct 12, 2010
    dude this pic is really fuckin cool
     
  10. #10 pianowski69, Oct 13, 2010
    I like it a lot. It has a nice deep thought to it.

    I think you should make that picture a clearer that it is a butterfly.

    I like the thought though. Nuclear bomb going off in a vast empty space. You dont really see it destroy anything. Then you see the burned up picture of the butterfly and it really hit me hard.
     
  11. #11 NoCalCann, Oct 13, 2010
    Cool pic I wouldve like to see the mountains lit up slightly from the blast.
     
  12. #12 NoCalCann, Oct 13, 2010

    and the paint down the road should be on fire:devious:
     
  13. #13 Imagination909, Oct 13, 2010
    Yeah you really need to put something up in those mountains/all that black area. The only time I looked at them was first glance at the picture, and then I get caught in a line (ironically theres the street divider) back and forth from the polaroid to the explosion.

    If you add something to the mountains/black area or at least lighten the area up you'll get that full circle most strive for and you won't be stuck in the center
     
  14. #14 GrahamAPhone, Oct 13, 2010
    Listen to this song while you look at the picture!
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N3N1MlvVc4]YouTube - Mad World - Gary Jules[/ame]
     
  15. #15 SmokeChoke, Oct 13, 2010
    hiroshima all over again
     
  16. #16 iamoni, Oct 13, 2010
    Ahahahhaa man.. so many comments !!

    I will definitely re-do this pic :D

    Hoe you'll like it too
     
  17. #17 iamoni, Oct 13, 2010

    man I'm so stoned right now I didn't notice

    Hope ...>>> not hOe sorrry
     
  18. #18 iamoni, Oct 13, 2010

    Yeah I also thought about that.. It could be the theme/ mood of the pic.
    I may alos do it funny/ serious or a scary feel
     
  19. #19 iamoni, Oct 13, 2010

    WTF? :D I just blazed. this pic stocked me up for a couple of minutes or so..
    Anyway I can also create that "song" mood to the pic..Yeah maybeI can re-do the pic
     

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