Say "You gon' get this work" then her pants will fly off or just whip your schlang out and she'll know what to do with it
"Is that a mirror in ur pocket? Cuz i can see myself in ur pants." "Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?" yours are good too OP, you should be turning vaginas into bowls of chile in no time.
'Excuse me, miss, I don't want to waste your time so I'm gonna be direct. I would really like to have sex with you. Would you like to go with me tonight?'
just be yourself, you dont need pick-up lines, shit i have chicks trying to get at this, but im know by many as being very classy and old fashion, so i keep them on the chase, cuz im not like those swag fags