Opinions on my rap beat?

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011.

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  1. #1 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
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  2. #2 cberry8, Mar 24, 2011
    It's actually pretty fucking dope dude! I didn't have my headphones on but from what it sounded like, it didn't hit THAT hard. Just seems like it's building up to something that doesn't come. Know what I mean?

    Definitely not hating, just trying to give constructive feedback. All the pieces are there though....mayyyy have to write something to it, definitely feelin it
     
  3. #3 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    The subs go hard I have them hooked up to mine but if your a real bass head I can always turn it up. But I kinda know what you mean it doesn't have that killer bass part that it could have.
     
  4. #4 SmokingSomeErb, Mar 24, 2011
    sounds really good man, it has a dubstepish vib to it, and reminds me of
    Wiz Kalifa - On my level
     
  5. #5 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    Well I do listen to dubstep and love On my level :smoke:. Thanks dude. I really liked this when I made it but wasnt sure if it just sounded good because it was mine.
     
  6. #6 roma, Mar 24, 2011
    it's not bad ;) work on your flow and transitions. very good
     
  7. #7 of montreal, Mar 24, 2011
    needs a snare

    other than that i like it
     
  8. #8 Noxnoctum, Mar 24, 2011
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    Ya sounds more like dubstep than rap to me... but that's a good thing in my book ;).

    Anyways, yeah, it's really good. But I agree with cberry8... it feels like it's building up to some huge climax that never comes.

    I'd mix it up, make it heavier, and turn it into a sick dubstep track if I were you.
     
  9. #9 PandaBud, Mar 24, 2011
  10. #10 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    idk Ive tried making dubstep and Im pretty awful at it.
     
  11. #11 Noxnoctum, Mar 24, 2011
    Well apparently not cause this sounds great, and I mean that totally 100% sincerely :wave:
     
  12. #12 highflyer1212, Mar 24, 2011
    I think you have to work on your fill timing a little bit, i know what youre going for though it sounds pretty good. just a few tweaks would be my opinion.
    what program do you use?
     
  13. #13 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    hah thanks I've only been making music a month and half, no musical background. I gotta go to class though I think I'll try and make some wobbles for it I know how to, maybe on the flatter part mostly flat with a couple quick wobbles.
     
  14. #14 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    fl studio 9 xxl producer edition
     
  15. #15 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    I also made this beat 2 days ago.

    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CC7XvgnJAHU]YouTube - Money Brings Games**HOT NEW 2011 RAP BEAT[/ame]
     
  16. #16 irishjap, Mar 24, 2011
    Good shit playa.
     
  17. #17 Noxnoctum, Mar 24, 2011
    Wow well that's impressive for only a month and a half. Keep at it, I've got friends who are always messing around with... I can't remember the name of it but some music maker thingie on the mac. Their stuff sucked at first but now it's getting REALLY good.
     
  18. #18 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    Garageband?
     
  19. #19 Noxnoctum, Mar 24, 2011
    Ya that's it. They use something fancier now though.
     
  20. #20 ChipThaRipper, Mar 24, 2011
    you sure it isnt FL Studio?
     
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