actually a collection of formal cinquains... begin to end...then begin again I lover let's romp like cats experience my heat join me in pleasures unsurpassed touch me II Beauty is the vision of a romantic mist and a girl moving through the trees crying III Silence words are useless they can only cause harm all I ever wanted was you don't talk IV That guy I loved him so I was a pawn to him happily opening my heart tear drops V My heart cannot stand this you covered up your face and wooed me with a mask so sweet crushing VI Do you understand pain gut wrenching, screaming pain gaze into the pools of my eyes see it? VII He is a fresh bandage 'round this...my trampled heart slowly healing what's hiding there kindness ----------------------------------------------------------------------follows the rise and fall of my first love...and the beginning of my second...
I Lover. Not a fool but an blinded one. Blinded by light. Burned by time. II Beauty. Harbour that I found. Curtains that kept me from seeing outside. III Silence. Did not speak. Did not ask. IV That guy. An cross road. You went left. I stood still. V My heart. I keep it in a jar. I show it around. I throw it away. VI Do you. Like flowers and sweets. Chain yourself to the wall Live fast and die young. VII He is. An escort. A boat? you're ticket away?
and it worked...and you know what...some of your takes are dead on too...you are good...a good writer will always touch on the hurts and needs common to us all...
so sweet, thanks for your kind words.... I'm sorry, me is very off the line at the moment.... Some may laugh some cry, but at the end we all will die.