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Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by WaterLillyFairy, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. I dont do it often, but since I'm all drunk now, I'll go ahead.. I write poems.. or at least I did when I was in highschool.. Is is one of my first ones.. tell me what you think...

    no laughing!!! :c)


    Crystal Glass and Silent Walls

    Crystal Glass and Silent Walls
    Earth Shattering screams and Echoing Calls.
    From the outside looking in,
    All is happy, free of sin.
    But from the inside screaming out,
    My heart and soul Burns to shout!
    The Chains that bind, the chains that hold,
    They tie me down, they place the mold.
    I try to scream, I cry, I fight,
    but the chains that bind hold on too tight.
    I'm falling down a dark black hole,
    as the demons within tear apart my soul.
    I scream, I wish, I hope and pray,
    for it to end, and to see the day.
    But the more I scream, the farther I fall
    Down Crystal Glass and Silent Walls.


    ::Runs away in embarrassment::
     
  2. I try to scream, I cry, I fight,
    but the chains that bind hold on too tight.


    That is a great line
     
  3. i loved your poem.. it was powerful..dont be embarassed at all.. shhhit! its fuckin awesome!
     

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