'nother ryhme

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by SublimeSmoke, Nov 5, 2010.

  1. Here's another rhyme I wrote, just finished off the last of my bud :(. Anyways lemme know what you think.


    Love a slung around word.
    Stigmas and attachments, developed over cataclysmic actions.
    Actually to the point, my position is quite a prize, looking in through devil eyes.
    Through mine, I vibe nothing more than a demon in disguise.
    No guises, no surprises, a slippery slope full of dope and pot smoke.
    But I'm locked tight like a chest of unattained passions.
    These feelings are massive.
    Eruptions and falling volcanic ashes.
    What the fucks up, whats down, whats happen'n all around.
    Can't sleep sound just need a kiss from this chick.
    Is this love or am I sick, feeling ill, it's thrill.
    This be bliss? Or maybe torture and piss.
    "I love you too" but doesn't it scare you?

     

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