Newest rap completed. Rate? Constructive criticism?

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by ETID, Nov 30, 2012.

  1. #1 ETID, Nov 30, 2012
  2. #2 Fritz Da Cat, Dec 2, 2012
    my lyrical miracle leaves spiritual residuals

    idk sounds good on some back packer rapper tip.

    mabe vocals could sound more fat, and present.
     
  3. #3 nzstoner, Dec 2, 2012
    that beat is hella dope! but i think your lyrics and delivery seems really forced. but its a decent song tho just keep practicing you'll get it
     
  4. #4 ETID, Dec 2, 2012
    Preciate it man. I know what you're saying. I keep listening and it SHOULD sound good but it just doesn't quite yet. Need to perfect the flow and syllable count.
     
  5. #5 SonicKush, Dec 3, 2012
    [quote name='"ETID"']Preciate it man. I know what you're saying. I keep listening and it SHOULD sound good but it just doesn't quite yet. Need to perfect the flow and syllable count.[/quote]

    That's exactly what I'm working on. You've got some dope rhymes, just get the flow down
     

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