New rap lyrics for my song (please check it out)

The backing music is basically from a progressive metal song my band wrote.



chorus:
I…
came from the top
But started to drop
And never did i know
when I'd stop
<o> </o>
but came to this game
and for what I got
the fame and fortune
was just anotha' knot, yea
<o> </o>
glory I seeked
when I found that
my problems peaked
and I couldn't sleep
I was too weak
Couldn't stay focused, man; couldn't focus, man, couldn't stay focused man
<o> </o>
but ya' gotta see my story see
then, anotha future failure, you won't be
you won't see me, again
might as well say, pce again, my friend
pce again my friend again pce again my friend again
<o> </o>
Verse:
and there I stood fresh in my peak
takin' on the world and driftin' in the flow
facin' my challenges as they come and go
thought I knew it all, all I had to know
<o> </o>
But there was more to life than I'd thought
Lessons to be learned, a whole shit lot
Staying at the top would be time bought
Ripe for a while till I started to rot
<o> </o>
It was time for me to go
Time for me to drop
Tried to stand tall
But knew I'd flop
And as I came to a crawl
I'd knew I'd fall
And knowing this, I Still, gave it my all
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
Chorus:
I…
came from the top
But started to drop
And never did i know
when I'd stop
<o> </o>
but came to this game
and for what I got
the fame and fortune
was just anotha' knot, yea
<o> </o>
I couldn't foresee
My future, see
Don't wanna be like me,
Don't take the road I lead
For see, the consequences
I couldn't believe, I just couldn't believe
What had happened to me, Man?!
<o> </o>
Too ambitious, I couldn't be stopped
Too arrogant, wouldn't listen to a lot
Thought I had it figured, and wouldn't be topped
But shit happens, and can't be fought
And that's life's lesson, it's gotta be taught
It's life, that's what's gotta be taught…
<o> </o>
Verse:
Then life started goin' down the tube
It was a struggle for life, struggle for food
Didn't know who to look to, didn't know who
Didn't know who I'd get to support you, who
<o> </o>
Were my only love,
My only care, and there
noone ever said that life was fair
Noone ever said there would be someone to lead you
Life has no guarantees, and I'm here to teach you
<o> </o>
The fact is things don't seem as they are
Never do things look up on par
But you gotta believe there's reason for how things are
I know it's tough, man, I know it's hard
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
Chorus:
Struggling for life isn't what I knew
Staying at the top wasn't just a fluke
All this can't be true, I've paid my dues
But that's not how it works, who told you?
<o> </o>
I…
came from the top
But started to drop
And never did i know
when I'd stop
<o> </o>
but came to this game
and for what I got
the fame and fortune
was just anotha' knot, yea
<o> </o>
I…
came from the top
But started to drop
And never did i know
when I'd stop
<o> </o>
but came to this game
and for what I got
the fame and fortune
was just anotha' knot, yea
<o> </o>
…
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>
<o> </o>

 

Haha, yeah I just wrote it in one go faded as hell from 2 am -6 am while listening to my song. Some it may not make sense to you, but the lyrics are basically a very general metaphor of a common life situation. (IE working hard for sucess, but not finding what you wanted or like falling from the top) But really, what I was trying to do was get a good flow down with the music and at least and come up with something pleasing to hear and I suceeded at that. I'll eventually be recording and seeing what's good.