New HipHop Instrumental i made check it

Discussion in 'General' started by 5tudio716, Jul 24, 2011.

  1. #1 5tudio716, Jul 24, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: Jul 24, 2011
    [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PyL3dD42vO0]‪Studio716 - Anthem‬‏ - YouTube[/ame]

    tell me what you think
    p.s.
    thanks to all of the grasscity community who check out my vids it means alot thanks.
     
  2. quality instrumental, congrats
     
  3. i like the beat, but i think you use the delay on that snare (or is it a clap) too much. If you did another snare beat at that part, and then sporadically changed it to that delayed sound it would sound more varied/interesting. when a listener hears something different from his/her expectations (like 5 bars of drum, then a bar with the delayed snare sound) it makes the song more memorable and interesting to listen to.

    Since it's made to be rapped over the repetitiveness would be fine, but if you're using it as a stand-alone kinda thing, try to change it up a bit. not bad tho
     
  4. I like your melody but man, you gotta be able to think past 808s.... kinda ruins a track for me.

    Good flow though ;)
     
  5. thanks appreciate the feedback guys
     
  6. really reminds me of a ti beat .. its nice tho
     
  7. ya i was going for a t.i. style
     

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