overall the values are very nice, you could use a bit more blending and transition between shadows though, your proportions look good too. I'd say the only constructive criticism I can give you is to focus on the eyes. The anatomy of the eye is not correct in your drawing and it looks very oval like. The eyes just look unfinished overall and if you put as much work into the eyes as you have the rest of the drawing I am sure it will improve it a great deal. As they say, "An artist's work is never done."
thanks the eyes were probably one of the first things that went into the drawing. i kinda did the eyes and together then slowly built up the face. so maybe that's why the eyes are fucked up lol.
Wow. Looks really good =] PotDealer - that drawing is amazing. I'd have to agree with PotDealer, the eyes just don't go with the pic completely.
Incubus is so played out. Prettiest girl I knew would'a thrown herself at him, damn... Only comment I can offer is to let the shadows do the work; and as always make it your own.
Looks really dam good! ive been drawing for a bit and have never gotten good at faces, thats awsome, keep it up!