Need some opinions :)

I was working on this piece, just to practice working with light. And i know this piece isn't perfect, far from it, but what i would like you guys to tell me is whether or not i am on the right track (light-wise )



UPDATED VERSION: vv



Any comments are appreciated!

 

Thanks! I uploaded a new version

I added some more light to the edges of the sun and the moon to smoothen the "sharpness" out. I also played around with the light in the background adding some more "light rays" to add some realism to the lighting.

Please tell me what you think

 

Thanks, i'll take that into consideration.