my writing about a deep fight

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  1. #1 MikeyChill, Nov 11, 2010
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    The Fight
    The struggle to win myself is eternal
    It pulls me down with promises of ecstasy
    It chains my soul, never truly letting go
    I love purity but I'm best friends with lust
    Crushing my soul into dust, this is the guilt that binds me
    Believing in freedom keeps me alive
    High hopes for these demons to flee
    But what if the demon is me, how will I ever be free
    Begging God to just pick me up and take me from this fight
    Bring me home to eternal light
    The city that shines with purity, its sings to my soul so lyrically
    Believing I'm away from my heavenly home I'm stuck here in exile
    Constantly on trial mile after mile
    Trying to get off this road called perdition
    Blinded by sin, I can't find the exit
    Waiting to be free from myself I'm like jackal and Hyde
    There's nowhere to hide so the devil offers me a ride
    Knowing he already fell, I run from Hell and look to Jesus
    Away from these thoughts and desires I run but they always catch me
    Telling me I'll never be free
    Heaven is a gift but it cost so much, seemingly lost by this evil touch
    This is my soul's starvation yearning for salvation
    But only knowing self gratification
    His blood is my cure, nothing else so pure
    It will drench my soul until these demons drown

    I will rise up and wear my eternal crown
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  2. Damn bro. Gave me chills reading it cause I can relate to every word. +Rep no doubt.
     


  3. Thanks man. That was the result of frustration channled.
     
  4. Beautiful sonnet. +rep
     

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