My weed poem

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  1. #1 oFriskyGnome, Apr 4, 2013
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    I've never written a poem before but last night I was 10 bowls in and suddenly felt like writing... What came out was this poem to people who are close minded about marijuana (like my parents) because they haven't experienced it and listen to propaganda.
    (It's a work in progress but let me know what you think)

    (Untitled so far)



    Simple minds, trapped in a box of potential wasted

    Minds are great just like a turkey basted

    But the oven is a box that a turkey gets placed in

    A turkey over cooked is fine till its tasted

    Let's face it, a turkey burnt is nothing but ruined

    Cook your mind too long and it's nothing but fluid

    Escape from the box and open ur mind

    Allow yourself to express what you might possibly find

    Because you live in the darkness of your miserable mind

    Searching for happiness but stress is all you find

    Come out of that box and see the light

    Doesn't matter who you are, you will be set right

    Simple minds, set to run like engines

    Based off lies told with good intentions

    Drugs are bad, yes, this is true

    But see there's a difference between me and you

    I see a plant and you should too

    It's one of Gods gifts to me and to you

    It grows in the ground, the dirt and the dust

    Only to be ruined be bureaucratic lust

    They've taken a gift and made an abomination

    An entire nation replacin' this small gift that's amazing

    Cancer patients just waitin' and hatin'

    The anguish they feel from the meds they've been takin'

    A green plant, beautiful flower, like a miniature tree

    Don't tell me you agree, those patients should be locked up, for weed

    Murderers, rapists, thieves and thugs

    Most in there cuz they got addicted to drugs

    Not plants, no, there is no addiction

    Only relief, happiness, and hope for those in remission

    Inner peace, happiness, tranquility found

    Your whole world opened up, all new sights and new sounds

    Life becomes clear your mind's box is now gone

    You can step out of your stress, to infinity, and beyond

    Concepts become known and the barrier lifted

    Set your mind free, it's no longer restricted

    The sky's the limit, you're just glad you're so gifted

    Take a second don't miss it, all these things the've existed

    Your own senses get lifted

    Reveal to you a world no longer conflicted

    Clear is the word to describe what you're feeling

    Every moment and atom becoming appealing

    Step out from the lies that you've already heard

    Have you ever been high and heard the sound of a bird

    A majestic tweet, bold and proud

    Sound echoes in waves through trees so loud

    In natures choir every voice is allowed

    Live in the moment or it's gone in the commotion and cloud

    You don't need to experience it but don't judge me I'm proud

    Weed didn't change me, it made me

    I'm open minded and won't regret it once I'm dead
     
  2. I will read this next time i toke up and tell you what i think.
     
  3. this is actually very good and enlightening
     
  4. good job dude fun to read i think ill try and write one wont be as long as yours oh and this is my first post ever congrats
     
  5. What strain were you smoking when you wrote this? I want some.
     
  6. 2 cookies and some serious indica
     

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