My thoughts, into a poem

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by misbehavior010, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. Welcome To The Planet Disaster

    How blind are we, the human race. We run around eyes closed, pushing negativity in each others face. We cry when we're happy, and shout when we're sad, so confused, yet trained like animals, following the commands of devils.So afraid of the end, yet consuming every poison that pushes us closer to death. It's sick how brainwashed we all are. We know right is right, and wrong is wrong. Instead of up we go down, down doesnt take half as long. We sleep to rest, and never just to dream, who needs dreams anymore? No longer do we push ourselves to go on, pushing someone else down is an easier way to disguise envy for strength. It's disgusting how we make ourselves belive that we need instead of want, and how we want what we realy dont need. We all know the rules, we know we shouldnt lie, yet no one can be true to oneself, or to others, and that the only way to survive is to decive, because everyone wants to come in first place, how wrong are we to think this life is a race?




    R.L.
    7/12/04
     
  2. awesome , keep writing
    peace out
     
  3. wow, that was really good! :)
     
  4. Bravo man, bravo. Reading that shit, and realizing that someone else has their head screwed on straight makes me want to cry. Good work.
     

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