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My Stoned Poem !

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by lonelyhashbrown, Jun 27, 2007.

  1. I'm in need of vitamins
    B6 : B12 and Glucosamine
    (No I cannot fight, I have no means)
    I desire the cosmos, But thats something I can't have
    (If I can't do wrong, I guess I'll settle for bad)
    Perm
    anent
    Mahr
    cuerrs
    Smell like Authenticity
    ((I want to reach you specifically)
    U
    C
    I
    Eam not a maggyzine writor
    But popcorn has its doubts




    What'd you think?
     
  2. Half of it makes no fucking sense, interesting format though.
    The spelling errors make it rather hard to read.
     
  3. common man, you never read any e.e cummings?
     
  4. I haven't read any Cummings yet, but I like yours anyways. peace
     
  5. Cummings just didn't use capital letters and had some pretty odd forms of writing, but his writing was by no means pointless, like this.
     
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