my second ever recorded verse

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010.

  1. #1 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
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    check this out

    my boy does the beats..i know my voice/flow/sound isnt perfect to this beat..but i think for my 2nd ever recorded verse, its rele not bad..im actually very happy with how it came out

    check it

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    one of the links should be the one where u dont have to dl it..not sure which one
    gimme honest feedback/criticism

    if ne1 wants to lay a verse down so we can collab..send it to me and ill give it to my boy and hell work his magic
     
  2. #2 aznno0odles, Jan 28, 2010
    oh yuppppp
     
  3. #3 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    lol thats in no way shape or form feedback ^ lol
     
  4. #4 stoner_lukas, Jan 28, 2010
    Gotta work on your flow man, try not to ride that 4/4 beat so much...and when you do ride that beat try not to rush

    Pretty good tho dude. I'm lookin forward to hearin more
     
  5. #5 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    haha thanks..like i said..only my second time, so i rele thought it wasnt bad
     
  6. #6 joekidd7, Jan 28, 2010
    "There's no way you can flow" :D

    Just kidding man not bad bro, keep working at it...beats phat as hell.
     
  7. #7 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    yo who wants to do a collab? cmon i know some people on here can spit sick shit, just record it
     
  8. #8 zanman13, Jan 28, 2010
    ahaha 2010 till infinity
    haha this probably beats any mainstream song
     
  9. #9 green.man.420, Jan 28, 2010
    Snds good bro, not bad at all!
     
  10. #10 thajiggaman, Jan 28, 2010
    more ls than the new york knicks, thats great lol. i enjoyed it man.
     
  11. #11 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    hahhaha thank u all

    cmonnn yoo someone lets colllab!
     
  12. #12 smoke2joints96, Jan 28, 2010
    I think it would sound a lotttt more authentic if you could implement more of a slang/street tone.


    Needs more of a hood pronuonciation. You feel me?
     
  13. #13 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    well..im not from the hood lol so yeah
     
  14. #14 Piasecki, Jan 28, 2010
    I'd be up for collabing on some beats, i can lay down some tracks for you to work to.
    Especially if you're interested in grime or dnb mc'ing, i like alot of break/2-step stuff and have a few tracks laid already.

    Hit me up on a PM if you like.
     
  15. #15 k.smith904, Jan 28, 2010
    Pretty good man. Damn good for a 2nd ever verse.

    Try to switch up the tempo/rhyme scheme a little more to keep the listener interested. I'm sure you will though once you record a full track.


    Lookin forward to hearing more for sure. :smoking:
     
  16. #16 smoker.of.pot, Jan 28, 2010
    dont try so hard u need to chill on the beat more and just let it flow out
     
  17. #17 k.smith904, Jan 28, 2010
    yeah it did seem like you were kinda forcin it. (maybe it was just nerves)
     
  18. #18 pnoygangsta, Jan 28, 2010

    AHHHHHHHHHHH I'D LOVE to collab with you if I could, but I don't have the right equipment and stuff. my styles a little different from yours though, every other line a punchline or sometimes I'll speed up and spit double time
     
  19. #19 ImWithWhatever, Jan 28, 2010
    i mean lol i can do that too with the punches and double time n shit..i wrote that shit in literally under 10 mins then did it 1 take.
     

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