no I was dead serious haha. This is what I consider poetry. The Passionate Shepherd to His Love -Christopher Marlowe, 1599. [SIZE=-1]Come live with me and be my love,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]And we will all the pleasures prove[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]That valleys, groves, hills, and fields[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Woods or steepy mountain yields[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]And we will sit upon the rocks,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Seeing the shepherds feed their flocks[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]By shallow rivers to whose falls[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Melodious birds sing madrigals.[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]And I will make thee beds of roses[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]And a thousand fragrant posies,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]A cap of flower, and a kirtle[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Embroidered all with leaves of myrtle;[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]A gown made of the finest wool[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Which from our pretty lambs we pull;[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Fair lined slippers for the cold[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]With buckles of the purest gold;[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]A belt of straw and ivy buds,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]With coral clasps and amber studs;[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]And if these pleasures may thee move,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Come live with me and be my love.[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]The shepherds' swains shall dance and sing[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]For thy delight each May morning:[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]If these delights thy mind may move,[/SIZE] [SIZE=-1]Then live with me and be my love.[/SIZE]
not my style my man. if you like that style then thats fine. i dont try to be artsy and sound like im from 16th century england. i try to go by this motto : the words that make it complicated never get congratulated. in other words, if you want to connect with people you have to speak from the heart and do it in a simplistic manner. a lot of the best art, whether its music, poetry or visual art, is very simple.
I like it, the emotion has tangibility; I had to read the whole thing, regardless of if I hadnt cared to finish it. Pretty interesting