here's a poem that i wrote last night it started as a simple weed poem but my mind started producing a'lot of thoughts so i revised it what do you think? my eyes can see you seeing me the looking tree is breaking free I have the seed for those in need but please take heed the devils feed we are here here is now no need to fear under your brow here is my light for it is night now i shall give my gift of sight a child is born there minds adorn when will they mourn there lives forsworn so let them dream this perfect scheme ibrahim said on a ream so don't be stressed on wisdoms quest when you've oppressed your day of rest.
Man I could never be a poem or song writer man. I read that poem and I'm like cool it could be a song, but I don't know how'd it sound, but I know some bad ass singer could make it sound cool. ONce he did that I could play a epic bassline too it though.
thanks, really? I would definately be interested in hearing that made into a song go ahead and do that if you want to that would be cool.
Well I don't know any singers in fact it's my pickiness about singers that has gotten me kicked out of, or quit several bands already, but I'll hold onto it, and maybe one day it'll be turned into a kick ass song. I get a deftones style vibe out of it I don't know why.
yeah thats a good style i was thinking it gave me a SOAD vibe, if it were to be a song. but yeah if your good at what you do keep on at it music is chaos interpratated into emotion and expelled out of your instrument of choice if you really feel it then it is good no matter how it sounds because its coming out of your force within.
Exactly when I'm playing my bass I can just let loose. But yeah you should try to get it turned into a song...or sell it seriously some bands will pay big money for a well written song.
open up your heart to the planets to the stars with your spirit take a trip to venus and mars you know einstein did while hitler hid now ablert lives forever in every single kid but of adolf hitler we are permanently rid picasso mr. dali and my man jimi hendrix these cool brothers make the world go round yeah they do it with art and jimi did it with sound but by all these men it was found that each and every person can be just as reknowned don't let the world's racist creeds give your pretty face a frown stand up for equal rights i mean buckle down we are the human race and we groove to the sounds
that's a good one, to me it tells the reader how we express our incomprehensible thoughts by taking ourselves on a journey through art and music, thus interpreting the uninterpretable.