My odd poems

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Love&Space, May 4, 2010.

  1. Comfort
    When after a day's opening
    bodies' logic forms a pattern
    Which one of us is madder?
    Can we train thoughts to scatter?

    Comfort, comfort
    Here's the air--oh very stale
    Man drained of life--without a knife
    Wood-dyed floor--yet money means more
    But pasta and peppermint make me insane.

    Roundabouts but not with drive
    What's the point of being alive?
    I often creep around my mind
    I've found I'm just like your kind
    But like forests I eat air
    Food tastes good but looks so bare
    Do I dare to rarely care for tortoise or hares?



    I'll try to post some more I've written.
    I admit, they're not exactly proper or sensical to most people, but it's my writing and my art.
     
  2. art shouldn't be easy, it won't be the first thing that pops into your mind.

    thats what its about.

    take your potential and focusing your efforts. creating.

    Unless its another movie about creative geniuses spouting shit all
     
  3. man you got talent ... keep on it..
     

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