my new songs [house]

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Toxy, Jan 14, 2012.

  1. give me some feedback guys! :wave:
     
  2. I listened to the beginning of the first song... and it starts really really really slow... Could've sped up the tempo and come quicker to your main melody parts.
     
  3. And from the sounds of your second song. All of your songs arent bad. But they need more depth. You need to have more going on. Maybe counter melody, definitely more beat. Less of the boring, "4 measures, add next instrument, repeat..."
     

  4. This. It could also use a bassline. But the melody itself is good. Just expand on it a little
     
  5. Thanks for the advice guys :)
     

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