So I doing a track that has two friends plotting to rob money for this lady's house, kinda stuck on where I should go next..I was thinking something like what just happened in the news where a father shoots his own masked son blah blah blah but Idk I want to be creative so any feedback would be great! I'm using this beat and this is a rough draft of what I got so far..just started wrting this like 20 min ago so be easy! [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZYorWVrr63E]rza - samurai showdown (instrumental) - YouTube[/ame] there was a man named matt, he needed fast cash tired of workin nine to five, he was passed that lyin in bed he thought of robbery, possibly stealin property and goin from living in poverty to properly, constanstly he was bein made into a mockery, so he started playin a few lotteries that didn't get em far, late on his credit cards he wanted a better car to boost his repertoire all those seminars he went to, was a waste he stood up in his apartment, started to pace in the darkness, grabbed a jay and sparked it, tossin ashes to his carpet like he was startin to commit arson his roommate barged in, and asked for his pardon wonderin if he took weed outta his glove compartment he said sit down, I'm tryna carve this plan you wanna be apart of it? ya I'm starvin damn okay do you know a heartless man, I'm searchin for a person that would be a perfect option stan perfect for what? taken a hostage for a profit I'm not tryna rob pockets, I don't need a novice so stan and matt stayed up all night tryna plan the facts, over and again, then ran em back i know this lady, she lives a lone and maybe has over a hundred grand stashed inside her of home how you know this? I noticed it when I was over she paid me thirty bucks to wash her land rover so I snuck around ducked down inside her house and found a safe, now that's what I'm talkin about her man hank died and she gained the esteemed inheritance so what's the plan? this all seems too arrogant well you gotta gun right? yeah..well one night, me and you dressed black wearin masks are gonna scare her ass into givin us hank's money, how you know she has it? Cuz she told me that she doesn't trust banks dumby to be continued....
Have the old lady turn out to be his roomates grandma ( have to change a few lines in that case) or ex teacher or something