This is the first good song i ever wrote and I dont know much about guitar but i like it and hope you all will too. It means a lot to hear some comments. I wrote it for this girl i really fucked up with so gonna try to get her back if this dont work then fuck it Ill move on. [ame=http://vimeo.com/4921596]Untitled on Vimeo[/ame] <object width="400" height="300"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=4921596&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=4921596&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="300"></embed></object>Untitled from zooyorkzooo on Vimeo. Might have to turn up the volume a little.
It's really not that bad, beginning kind of sucked though, no offense. If I were a women I'd go down on you if you wrote that for me :]. Good luck with getting her again.
It could use some more work i know But i just wrote the guitar and came up with the melody in about a hour. Thanks for the critique. thanks for the luck too.
Sorry for double post but she saw it and acutally sent me a message back for the frist time in months. hell yeah i might have a chance!
