My first really cool song

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by TooCool toQuit, Oct 29, 2004.

  1. This song came to me when I was sitting outside with my acoustic guitar. Started playing the chord progression because it just... well... came to me. The words sprung along with it.

    Lyrics
    I left home just yesterday
    figured you'd never change your ways
    but every turn I made, well it made me think of you
    and I turned that car around

    With all the mistakes we made
    we still made it through
    that never changed my feelings for you
    I had to learn to forgive
    and forget again and again
    and right here on this freeway
    I'm thinking we could try this again

    I pulled into our driveway
    said Honey, can we work this out
    and the tear drops on your face
    they made me know without a doubt

    With all the mistakes we made
    we still made it through
    that never changed my feelings for you
    I had to learn to forgive
    and forget again and again
    and right here on our driveway
    I'm thinking we could try this again

    Here is the link to download the mp3.
    http://www.nocommentrock.com/Try%20this%20again.mp3

    So, give me some reviews. What do you like about it? not like about it?
     

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