My first rap entitled "Revolution"- Check it out

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by dbpwattack, Oct 4, 2007.

  1. #1 dbpwattack, Oct 4, 2007
  2. #2 notbakedenough, Oct 4, 2007
    The title "Revolution" is already held by a quite popular song...Just thought I'd mention that.
     
  3. #3 dbpwattack, Oct 4, 2007
    there's tons of artists who have songs named "Revolution" but now that I think about I like to be unique
     
  4. #4 mkurucar, Oct 4, 2007
    im not a huge hip-hop guy, but thats pretty sick, has a sage francis feel to it
     
  5. #5 KeepSmokinReefa, Oct 4, 2007
    :confused:
     
  6. #6 CannabisInCanada, Oct 4, 2007
    Sounds pretty amateur at alot of points, you need to work on ending your lines with more power. All the cc I can give. Keep workin' on it man!
     
  7. #7 calicheese23, Oct 5, 2007
    Thats sweet man. You can tell your reading your lyrics though. Its what I sound like when I try to record stuff. Also the vocals sound hollow, maybe some filters or a new mic can help? Its good though, good topic.
     
  8. #8 VisionOfGandhi, Oct 5, 2007
    I dunno man you need to develop your flow and delivery more, not horrible but keep workin.
     

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