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My first rap entitled "Revolution"- Check it out

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by dbpwattack, Oct 4, 2007.

  1. The title "Revolution" is already held by a quite popular song...Just thought I'd mention that.
     
  2. there's tons of artists who have songs named "Revolution" but now that I think about I like to be unique
     
  3. im not a huge hip-hop guy, but thats pretty sick, has a sage francis feel to it
     
  4. Sounds pretty amateur at alot of points, you need to work on ending your lines with more power. All the cc I can give. Keep workin' on it man!
     
  5. Thats sweet man. You can tell your reading your lyrics though. Its what I sound like when I try to record stuff. Also the vocals sound hollow, maybe some filters or a new mic can help? Its good though, good topic.
     
  6. I dunno man you need to develop your flow and delivery more, not horrible but keep workin.
     

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