My First COMEDY stand-up act...how you think i did?

Watching now. First!

Hm it was alright! There were some funny things in there! I had some laughs. but some things just... kinda not very funny. I'm being honest bro because I want the best for you! I hope you get some good feedback and do it again!

 

Check my edit I really laughed at the belt buckle thing when you said you sounded like an old western guy. That was pretty funny. Most of the stuff was pretty funny!! Please get some new material and do it again!! I'd love to see more! And maybe you could post a video before you go on stage so we could give you some pointers? We want the best for you, bro.

And also, at some times it seemed a little preachy. Like the water into weed thing kinda got a little preachy, and less funny. That's just my opinion, don't be offended! Again I just want the best for you.

 

I think that yes you do have some potential for stand up. You will have to get use to being more comfortable with the crowd and getting the right tempo down. Your jokes were decent but could have been a little better executed. What I mean is that you need to make them kinda flow together better. You'll get there. I'd say kept going for it if this is your dream.

 

i thout it was prety funy but you talk to much about weed lol

 

i saw it on my youtube and it was awesome dude! i'm not gonna lie to you and say it was perfect and everything but it was awesome for your first time man!

i laughed throughout the whole thing haha

only thing i can think of is don't stay on weed for too long. hit lots of subjects.

 

Good luck man!! I love how you think. You just wanna make people laugh, and you succeed. You're a great person and fucking hilarious. Can't wait for next week!!!

And don't think that just because someone offers advice, they didn't like it. It is probably the oposite. They give feedback because they liked parts of it and would love to see it improve!

Peace

 

Well shit, I'd say if was just free style and you didn't prepare the set then you did pretty damn good then.

 

and i read it's a freestyle man?? haha fucking awesome.. maybe we can tour together sometime lol tunes and comedy they go hand in hand!! hahaha

 

Decent for open-mic...Need more creative jokes though, honestly, it was kind of stale after the first couple of minutes.

 

tbh i didn't think it was that funny but I did like the part about the western belt buckle hahaha.

I mean, its your first time so you just gotta keep working at it! I remember watching a Dave Chappelle interview and he got booed off stage his first time! Practice makes perfect.

One thing I would say is to work on your execution. Some of the stuff would have been funnier if you just worked on the flow a bit and worked on the timing of the punch lines. Like, I think you should build up to the punchlines a bit more. I hope that makes sense...

 

Actually pretty damn good. I look forward to more stoner comedy.

 

Everyone has potential in comedy, most of them are just unfunny in general...How they move on the stage, literate with expressions, hand gestures. There is more to comedy than just the crackin' of jokes, however, you should really work on going into these shows with a script...Jokes you write down beforehand and recite over and over, some clubs even let you get up with a handful of cue cards. Writing down material helps with a smoother all-around show, the transition isn't forced for the most part and you will be more comfortable on-stage.

Right now you're still a bit rough.