[Mind at War] A poem I wrote while high...

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Godfather420, Aug 2, 2010.

  1. #1 Godfather420, Aug 2, 2010
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    -Mind at War-

    A Shallow Shadow cast in the dark
    The knife laughs as it cuts the bark
    A ruined face alone in their minds
    Personality splits; as it rebinds
    Time cast a foggy shadow of rain
    I walk the linear labyrinth of my brain
    Personality is a two faced puzzle
    Shackle your mind; and put your freedom in a muzzle.

    -The Godfather of 420
     
  2. #2 YEM, Aug 2, 2010
    This is great. Keep posting/writing more! :)
     
  3. #3 LucidLife, Aug 2, 2010
    I like that a lot, it flows so very nicely.
     
  4. #4 Godfather420, Aug 2, 2010
    Thanks guys, Check out the other poem I posted [John Proctor]
     
  5. #5 ubertoker, Aug 2, 2010
    Definitely something there, it's a little difficult to decipher some of the imagery but that's the point isn't it. I like it.
     

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